hey! i loved this story an i was just wondering if you were going to actually form it into a story or leave it as a one shot an possibly make a sequel. the story was adorably cute! anyways lemme know! adios!

aw!!
so swet!
please continue?

give me more! give me more!

wonderful! but i think it needs to be longer; you should add another chapter. it'd be so cute! but it's adorable anyway.

-Wolf-Chan :3

OMG U HAVE GOT TO MAKE IT LONGER! AT LEAST MAKE IT A TWO-SHOT! to tell da truth, i like two-shots betta than one-shots or stories...stories: too long. one shot: too short.

i really like it so cute could you make a sequel please!

I really liked this story and i think you should continue it a litle longer or at least a chapter or 2. This is one of my favorite fics so i hope you continue.

please WRITE ANOTHER ONE!

i want u to continue this story! it really is sweet! u cant just leave it unfinished! please update w/more!

...heh...you think im attacking you because you disliked my friends story...well think again..i answere many reviews like this and its not because im holding a grudge...(i will never stoop so low as to insult someone because they insulted my friend...) i will still say what i said before...u ruined sesshomaru...him having short hair is just pathetic!(sesshomaru is my favorite charicter on inuyasha, and your insulting him...of course thats goin to fire me...)... im upset that you think i hate your story just because u insulted my friend...i hate it because it sucks...inuyasha is suppose to be with kagome...sesshomaru should be with rin or kagura...where the ** is sango and miroku there my favorite couple! you ruined the story yourself...you ended it when it was incomplete, the couplings were screwed up...and you mad esesshomaru's hair short! i have nothin more to say!

Hey Artee!
Tis Merber your BEST FRIEND!
I just finished reading the first chappie of your story AGAIN and went to look at your reviews...i saw a bad one...after doing the research that Merbers do i figured it out! Hey albinoraven6, if you are reading this you can go to hell because this story rocks!
You obviously insulted Artee because she told your friend wutever her name is that she didn't like her story! Well person i was reading that story over Artee's shoulder and it sucked. At least Artee left a nice review because i sure wouldn't have. You need to get a life and stop being mean to her or ELSE! You won't be a happy camper once i get a hold of you.
Sporky/Merber
P.S. i know i already said this but you and your friend SUCK!

...*long silence*...i hate this story! you ruined sesshomaru! i like his long white/silver hair! i dont like it short! and him liking Kagome? major ew! go hide in a refrigerator or something to refrain yourself from writting! i will coment you on your good romantic content...its probably the only good thing...even if the couplings are screwed up... i wont tare you appart with critizism because im a writter too and not everyone is perfict...(i write fanfictions for inuyasha, and teen titans...)

THIS IS SO KAWAAI ^-^. Please consider continuing it hehe.
Formerly Maki Kino Kiko
Currently Waizu Yoru Ame Otome or WYAO

I'll wait however long it takes for a second chapter. It's a great one shot, but it would be an even better continued story. please tell me when you decide to update it.
my email: suikogirl@hotmail.com

*sniff, sniff* That was the best thing I had ever read. Please contiue!(SORRY FOR SPELLING)