excellent story!

Your fanfic is the greatest one I have read about Percy, and I have read plenty.

If you cut out 'The Scarlet Raven' you get a very realistic and canon view of who Percy is and what he was up to during OotP. That is hard to do with AU stories but you pull it off amazingly.

I love all your AU characters especially love Mrs. Swainbrook and Johnny. Your use of Mrs. Figg, Lucius, Penelope, Perkins, Fudge, and even Wormtail are exceptionally done.

I love how you take these barely-mentioned background characters, like Mr. Weasley's co-worker, or the patient with a warewolf bite, and turn them into their own personas. Also, Percy is dead on, and I really like your representation of the Minister.

*laughter* You know, I always thought Mother Swainbrooke was observant. Or did she just see the cloak and make the connection? If the answer to that was ment to be in the story, then I'm really oblivious, no? ^^'

I have always been a sucker for the nerd turned hero stories, and Percy Weasley fills that role to perfection in your story. I read the whole thing in one go and loved every second of it!!

Finally someone makes a story about percy! I been dying 2 see if someone has.
WILL ALL U FU%#*ING PERCY HATERS GETS THE HELL OFFA THIS FANFIC!?!?!?!? IF U HATE PERCY THEN WHY R U HERE?!?!?! I LOVE PERCY SO IF U DON"T GOT NUTTIN NICE 2 SAY BOUT HIM,
GET YOUR ** OUTTA HERE!
PS. Go jump in front of a fu%#*ing bus

Wonderful story!! Absolutely brilliant and fantabulososos! (I can never work out how to finish spelling that word)

Ahem...anyway! Loved it...and is it as open as it appears for a sequal? Hope so! *Dashes off to see if there is one*
AZ

Was jonesing for more, so I read this one... Not bad. I don't like the thought of Percy as, well, Percy. He doesn't fit the dashing hero image of the Pimpernel. He's such a dork. But there you go, making the baddies good. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I loved Malfoy, Sr. as Chauvlain. All in all, another great one. More, please.

Awesome...That was just flippin' awesome. I just love it when Percy gets to be the hero.

This story makes Percy almost likeable.
Almost ... he's still a pompous **.
And why does everyone think he has to save the world single handed? (Perkins doesn't count as he's the one to bequeath this job)
In the end he's not alone anymore and hopefully will get his priorities right.
What do I babble? this is a fanfic and a good one too!
I love it how you kept up with events and people from your other Stories (SSA) and the books.
Keep up the good work!

Are Crabbe and Goyle the sons or the fathers? I know its a stupid question since Lucius wouldnt have any reason to hang around woth Crabbe and Goyle junior...but i just wondered.

that was really nice, I really like Percy.

that was really nice, I really like Percy.

you know that strangling thing? I really wish fictional characters were solid so i cood :) arrogant prat thinks he's so great for capturing petty criminals like the "loo bandit". and he thinks he's soo much better than the Order. honestly. and walking out on Penny's parents like that, with no explanation. what an **. sorry. the fact that it annoys me so much just shows what a good writer you are. cause it's annoying the crud outta me. btw if this is a dead fic I'm going to have to throw things.

I must say again that I love this story. Percy can be so nice sometimes, but other times I just want to STRANGLE him! Or smack him. Really really really hard. Maybe it would knock some sense into him.