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That Freak You Saw With The Weasels Last Friday
2004-04-12 . chapter 1
This is great, but I must ask, have you been watching too much Harry Potter Puppet Pals? You sound like me. :) I love this! *runs to read Chapter 2*
-Sky
Donkey-Chic
2004-02-06 . chapter 4
OKAY OKAY THIS STORY IS NO BETTER THAN THE LAST! you must be smart! no usin spellin mistakes! me still sugar and cafiene high HAHAHAHHAHAH
Labschiz
2004-01-24 . chapter 4
WAAI! That wuz cute! Yay, Arty got his pants wet, tehehe!! ::points at Artemis and laughs::
What a bad babysitter. He should know the pain of watching toddlers! I shall show him!!
::throws toys and other objects at Artemis' head::
Arty: AAh! Stop, you lunatic! Ow! Butler! ::puts arms over his head and runs::
Me: You can't get away! BWAHAHAHAHA! ::throws a rubber duckie::
*SQUEAK*
Identity99
2004-01-24 . chapter 4
Amber damien make a cute couple.
I know you said no fairys in this one, but i think it would be funny to have Foaly send Holly over there since she dosen't know about Damien.
Or does she? I don't know. I can never remember theses things.
God, you update fast!
I update my stories but not as fast as you.
the reviewers don't coomplain though, so I think they like my stories.
Why are they on a plane again? that's just a little confusing.
Then again I'm just a little confusing also and I don't care.
Oh well.
Your fellow writer,
Identity99
P.S. BYE!
ArtyFowl05
2004-01-23 . chapter 4
heehee... that was so cute! hmm... wonder what will happen next? *sly fox stare* especially underground. UPDATE PLEASE!
SpikeTv58
2004-01-23 . chapter 4
Funny but Short
Schizophrenic Inner Child
2004-01-23 . chapter 4
I. Think. You. Are. MAD!
Not that that's a bad thing, of course! ^_^
Um, I don't think Butler would be allowed weapons at an airport. How can you "properly 'conceal'" a weapon? I mean, if he went on a plane, he'd have to declare it, and, even if he wasn't going to go on a flight, he wouldn't be allowed to have a weapon anywhere near an airport, because of terrorism. (This is true for the UK, and it would be the same with Ireland. Just not for the same reasons :p)
Anyway, by all means have a sequel, but be warned: 90% OF THE TIME, SEQUELS ARE WORSE THAN THE ORIGINAL STORY, UNLESS THE STORIES WERE ORIGINALLY PLANNED TO BE A SERIES. But, yeah, if you want to write a sequel, do, if you want to.
Heh, for what it's worth, I quite enjoyed this little ficlet.
~S.I.C.~
Sir Deranged Reindeer
2004-01-22 . chapter 1
That's funny. Spastic but funny. Also it's funny that damien calls Arty a vampire because when I rp on Neopets I use a character named Artemis and he -is- a vampire. lol.
Identity99
2004-01-22 . chapter 3
HI Again!
You used my idea. COOL!
I like Arty and Amber and Damien and Juliet.
Another idea:
When Artemis goes back to school, have a note sent home about "bring siblings week" Angeline will see it and decide that Damien should go. And if you want you could have Amber sneak over there too because she has an older sister named Tray.
Or not.
People tend to live longer when they listen to me. {hint, hint}
OOh OOh! Here's a song:
My teacher hit meon the head with a ruler.
So I met her at the door with a loaded 44,
And she ain't my teacher no more.
Ha, ha! that sounds like something Arty would sing!
Or not.
Uh, bye.
P.S This is going on my favorite stories list.
Mew
2004-01-22 . chapter 3
I feel very very sorry for artemis.
neobeard
2004-01-22 . chapter 3
I like it but i think u should seriously reconsidder not using faries because it would make your storys even better
Schizophrenic Inner Child
2004-01-22 . chapter 3
Heh, this one was funny. But it was way too short! *cries*
Again, I will say I love the way Angeline really thinks the best of Damien and Amber! (Wet trousers... *laughs*) Just a suggestion, but you could have Art trying to tell Angeline exactly what kind of terrors the kids are (I am so glad it's him, not me!) and she wouldn't believe him! Hah, poor Arty!
Want more, please update soon!
~S.I.C.~
Schizophrenic Inner Child
2004-01-22 . chapter 2
YAY! Two more chapters to R&R!
This chapter was good! Heh, cheers for explaining why ans when Damien came on board (he rocks! More of him!)... ^_^
Well done, for the paragraphs, but you need more; whenever someone else starts talking, it's a new paragraph. It makes the writing way more spaced out, which can look strange, but in general it becomes easier to read.
By the way, I just had to mention this; it's so CUTE the way you have Angeline believing Damien and his mate are really sweet when they're not. Sort of cliche, especially if you're talking about TV shows, but this really works with the way you've written this.
I'll go off to read the next chapter. YAY! (Look. Over-ruddy-punctuation. I MUST be excited... ^_^;;)
Labschiz
2004-01-21 . chapter 1
HAHA! This is cute. Oh, pleeze write more. I luv the plot-thingy...idea. Yeah, that's it! Anywho, keep it up! I lyke where this is going. Hehe... I want the kid to have an accident on Arty's lap...yes, I know. I have a brilliant mind too!
One more thing. Here's a word of advice: allow anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more that way.
OKIE! gtg, update plz!
~ Lulu a.k.a the Pigeon Queen
BWAHAHAHAHA! ahem...sorry, couldn't help it
^-^'
Identity99
2004-01-21 . chapter 1
Except anonymous reviews.
FUNNY!
Make Damien go to a kindergarten summerschool class and have him bring home an annoy girl, as a friend.
AND NAME HER AMBER!
That names funny cause it's also a brownish color.
Am I the first one to review you.
Yes: COOL!
No: DANG IT!
Your fellow writer,
Identity99
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