Oh, wow! I read a bunch of your stuff before, and I know I've read this too, but I guess I never reviewed. I love this! I love the image of Dally as a little blabbermouth. He's sweet with an edge developed from pure need. I love that his toughness is only to survive, and that as soon as someone shows him compassion he melts (at this stage in his life at least). But, I also love that he's not a good little boy - he's still one of those that just finds trouble effortlessly, a smart-mouthed little brat, lol. He'd be a pain in anyone's ** regardless of whether he was jaded and tough or not.

"Seb'n." Haha, that cracked me up. I love his inadvertent cuteness.

Please keep writing! I know you've been gone from the Outsiders fan forum for quite awhile, but you should come back! It's quite the hopping community now. I'd love to see more of this!

Write some more eh? Great story... really takes one into dally's shoes.

of course--continue! Your plot for this story is such an awsome idea! Please update soon! I'll be waiting!

you better keep going, this is really good

Continue! This is a great piece you have. Keep up the good job.

Wow, that was super good!! You cleaned up alot from the first chapter, its getting really good!!

definately continue on! It's good and very unique! I'm definately hookd so keep it coming and update soon!

Great - I just read both chapters and really liked the story so far. Good writing, interesting characters, and a great new plot idea - different from the others on this site. Keep going.

great story, I'm loving it!

Hey! That was really good please continue :)

Loved it! You're writing style was flowing and simple to follow. Also the plot was very original so that made it worth reading. You have a very good fan fic here that should be continued by all means. No doubt you are a very talented writer and it should be continued.

Continue on! This is really good, and you've done a great job of putting Dally in character, but you should work on letting him have better grammer, I can barely tell what he's saying a lot of the time.

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I feels so specials! And yes, you must definitely continue this - and you absolutely can NOT leave this one to collect dust. In your own words, "...was born to be something. It would be a waste otherwise." Gotta love Dally's sense of morality, strange how these things only work for him. Will be seeing more of Tom and the gang or are we going straight into juvie? Either way this story is amazing and has wonderful potential. You can't let me down and not update - it would be a shame and downright evil or you. Well, get a move on and start typing that next chapter! I can't wait! Loves
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I LOVED this story, keep the chapter's coming good job

That's really good, I like it keep it up and please update soon :)