Excellent story full of angst.

I feel sorry for Yugi as he's trying to cope with Atem leaving him and he's not doing very well in his battle.

I guess the reason he's in the Soul Room is that he's probably searching for a way to find his ex-other half again.

I'm speechless. That was unbelievable. Well done.

wow... that was awesome... really sad, but awesome...

Wow. wonderful fic. It's probably obvious but please tell me this isn't a oneshot! i really hope you continue this fic!

Interesting. It's kind of sad how much sense it makes that the hikaris wouldn't last long after their yamis were gone.

This is so good I don't even know what to say about it. I'll just say that I've spent most of the afternoon reading your stories when I should be doing something else, because they're all so good I can't stop. This one may be my favorite... maybe because it feels something like I feel about the end of the manga, if you know what I mean.
Damn. I just hope I can write this well someday.

I love your writing style! I'm not sure if I have complete understanding of what you were trying to say here. If I just look at Yugi's story, he seems to miss his dark very much. Then, looking at Ryou's, does he miss him or does he hate him or what? And with Malik, I'm not sure what was going on. This was quite good, though, and if there will be more, maybe you could clarify some of this for me (I may just be dense) ^__^

oh, right, wanted to ask. . . how did Ryoh get caught with the knife? Silly boy . . . .
~Sam

Wow... That was a wonderfully written story... You're a true writer. It was a beautiful, sad story...
^_^;; You're the first person I saw who used Atemu. I love that name... I'm so glad you put it in. ^_^
I hope you keep writting.. It was really good. ^_^

wow
incredible.
~airy

@_@ Wow, that's just so...dark! *pokes self* Poor Yuugi-chan! T_T And Ryou!
-_-U I hope Malik's going to be ok.
Ryuujitsu & co.
PS: what caught my attention was your pen name. My real first name is Simone! @_@ I just thought that was weird. *coughs* Ahem. So, put the second part up soon! *prods*

oh wow! angst galore ^^ i loved it!! is there going to be a sequel?? ^^;;

That was so cute in a really depressing kinda way...I really mean it. It was very touching. I almost cried...Did they all die?
I enjoyed it a lot...Really ^_^ Very depressing and very deep.