Wow! I love how you are intertwining the lives of Arthur and Marguerite, through Annabelle Montclair. Who is also Adrienne's mother. Who does Marguerite take the name Smith from?? Can't wait to read your next chapter.

That's very interesting, and well-written. I'm curious for more!
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Labyrinth? R u going 2 do a crossover or is it just a mention? anyway the story shows promise, I can't say much more because it so short...
this is ur cue 2 write more... lol

Hmm... interesting ... Arthur ... Summerlee?
Ad now that I think about it; Annabelle? ...Anna? >His< Anna?
:oD Oy, I LIKE that!! More, please!!

oh what a sad chapter...but an interesting twist...will Marguerite ever see her again?

I thought there was heart in Annabelle... though I feel that her goal could have been sharped somewhat. I also did not feel a sense of the space they were in or even when it was happening.. I do not know if this was left out on purpose... but I feel that if such as added there could be much improvement.

great opening chapter can't wait to see how this unfolds!

That was so sweet! Are you gonna show Marguerite looking for Annabelle?