Hm, seems that so far, so good. Very good wording and nice descriptions; I especially like Urd and Skuld's notions and thoughts of their father's storm, and even more so the small bits of information on the different mythology takes.

From what I can gather of the characters and their individual personalities, you've seemed to have them written very clearly to their originals. Nicely done! Keep up the great work.

this is a verry interesting story and one that i hope will git beter and beter as time moves on.

I really think that ppl around this site are becoming too lazy to review good stories...
Anyway, i thought u might use a bit of encorajment to keep going! It's good so far, but pls don't do that"mortal becomes god/demon and is allpowerfull all of a sudden" k?