Yes. Lengthen please :D

Reading this, then knowning he is going to die, is really really depressing. But your right it does stand well on his own, I especially like the line in the begining about as soon as he was comfortable he got a leg cramp. Very funny. ^_^

Thank you for the image of shirtless Norrington. Fangirl squee moment there. This was very good.

Well, it is well written. I believe James will think similarly to what you said, except for the last part about finding herself a new lady. He loves Elizabeth too deeply, poor guy. Will check on your other works.

I think this is very well written and should become a longer fic! *applauds* =)

You should continue with this story. Norrington needs a litle love in his life. I didn't think Eliabeth was right for him anyway. He deserves someone who will love him despite his faults.

"Horrified the man said no. He was probably just afraid that he would get hung or something."

Hee-hee. I wouldn't be caught in the Caribbean sleeping in anything but my skin. It's hot enough in North Carolina let alone somewhere closer to the equator...

Well. Very, very, very, very, very... VERY, very good.

Very. Good.

Very.

Nice introspective piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Go Norrington! I like his character -- and I hear the actor is working on POTC2 (and hopefully 3).

That was really sweet. I really enjoyed it.

I certainly wouldn't mind this being made into a larger piece. It's very good. A nice introspect mini-fic and very Norrington. *holds out a brand new flag with the words 'Norrington Defense League' embrodered across* I'm a proud new member of the NDL and and thrilled to have found such a good fic so soon.

This is breathtakingly wonderfully written. A really good insight into Norrington - which is rare.

Grammar error: "who would have gave up". It's "who would have GIEVN up".

I loved this! Excellent writing. I think you should turn it into a longer fic. Much love for the Commodore! - GIna

Sequal? In the realm of 'yea, Norrington actually DOES find someone who he can love who loves him' kind of sequal? No more poor stiff shoulders? Pretty please?

Wow...I like it. I think it'd actually turn into an excelent fic. ^.^ Please continue with our almighy writing abilities! ^_^!

Aww... awesomely written! I'm a Will/Liz fan, but yeah, that deleted scene *was* insightful. It's nice to see how you expanded on that!
Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!!