Awsome story!^-^come up with next chapter soon as you can!^-^

With (or Wiz) from DNAngel right? How cute. (smiles)

Vewy vewy good and njew chappie Sakuya!! ^__^ This is ShadowV from the oekaki if you didn't know.

It's not very well-written, but because English is not your native language, it is a very good attempt! The ideas themselves are very interesting, even if the grammar and spelling are lacking, and the story does not "flow" (something that my Writing teacher has grilled into my head as being important, although it is not really nessisary to get a point across).

Cool story so far! Am I in this one? I forgot.