omg, thats so sad. im lyk crying rite now.

You deserve an Olympic medal for this! Great fic!

sad. very sad.

Wow, this was... I don't really know what to say. Just good is too plain. It was... Powerful. Yeah, that word could work. You could nearly touch all the emotions with your fingers. And I even got tears in my eyes!

I admit it - I love the way you switch between the present and past. And for all your hard work I hope didn’t give you too much grief about the italics. It’s really interesting how well you managed to balance it all off (interesting because I could, of course, not).
I very much enjoyed reading this in Butler’s POV. It is not very often done successfully, but you did a great job portraying his emotions. Yay for Butler centric fics!

Made me cry...

That was way angsty. Well writen though, in a very depressing way. Now where is my prozac?

WOW. This is very good... not many people go succesfully into Butler's POV, but this is... wow. Everything is so perfect. The drama is amazing, and without using out-of-the-ordinary language. Very powerful. Not much else to say. ^.^

I admit it. Im a hopeless romantic. This story was indeniably beautiful, but there was one thing I would hav liked you to elaborate on. I wanted to see the fairies reaction to Artimis' death.

I know that you mentioned them briefly, but I would have liked to see them maybe confront Butler or something, I dunno...

All in all a great tale though!

Wow...very deep/thoughtful
...wow...

Hi.Me again. Im reading all of your storys. they are good.(Poor,poor Artemis.He lived a short and criminal life.Muahahahahah!!)(sorry)

OMG, that was so sad! ARTEMIS! The entire way you wrote this fanfiction, like all the flashbacks every other paragraph and--Argh. This is just too good for words. I swear, if the story didn't stop where it did, my poster project would have watermarks all over it. B/c I was reading fanfictions and doing my poster project. Eh, who am I kidding? I was reading fanfictions and PRETENDING to work on my project. But seriously, this story almost made me cry all over it. You are a very talented author!

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

...speechless. I thought the same thing at first when I began reading EC (that story would focus on events set in motion by Artemis' death) You pulled off a fantastic job.

That was a very well written story! I enjoyed every minute of it. I always wondered what it might have been like if Artemis had been shot...of course, I really didn't want him to die...

~Hitokiri Takushi~

This is beautiful, BK. I'm reading all your other stuff...not gonna cry...