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Reviews for: Unfinished Business
buzz
2004-08-07 . chapter 1
Interesting thoughts here but kind of redundant -- most of this was pretty well brought out in the series, I thought. But your writing style is interesting.
Helena Russel
2004-03-04 . chapter 1
Wonderful story, Karmyn. Thanks for this one.
Anne
Melchy
2004-01-30 . chapter 1
I love this story Karmyn. It just goes to show that finding your heart's desire may take much longer than you think, but it's so worth it in the end. Even in his state as a ghost, he can still know that she is the one for him and that the family was meant to be his. Thank you so much.
Sophie
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Sweet! I always thought that the Captain had never really experienced true love until he met Carolyn Muir - as if he was waiting all those years to find his soulmate. You did a great job explaining his motivations - well done!
CottageGhost
2004-01-24 . chapter 1
Good stuff once again, Karmyn! I really like how you show Captain Gregg's motivations for haunting Gull Cottage -- including the most important one: Carolyn. Well done!
Thanks for sharing!
Chantal
Mary
2004-01-24 . chapter 1
I like this Karmyn. Short, sweet and definitely the case for Daniel and Carolyn. He is waiting for her.
Mary
Aria
2004-01-22 . chapter 1
I liked this. I agree with your theory as to why the Captain's still around. And it also fits with the book and the film - he's able to move on with Carolyn after she dies.
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