Reviews for Unfinished Business

buzz 2004-08-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseInteresting thoughts here but kind of redundant -- most of this was pretty well brought out in the series, I thought. But your writing style is interesting.
Helena Russel 2004-03-04 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story, Karmyn. Thanks for this one. Anne
Melchy 2004-01-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story Karmyn. It just goes to show that finding your heart's desire may take much longer than you think, but it's so worth it in the end. Even in his state as a ghost, he can still know that she is the one for him and that the family was meant to be his. Thank you so much.
Sophie 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseSweet! I always thought that the Captain had never really experienced true love until he met Carolyn Muir - as if he was waiting all those years to find his soulmate. You did a great job explaining his motivations - well done!
CottageGhost 2004-01-24 ch 1,	abuseGood stuff once again, Karmyn! I really like how you show Captain Gregg's motivations for haunting Gull Cottage -- including the most important one: Carolyn. Well done! Thanks for sharing! Chantal
Mary 2004-01-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this Karmyn. Short, sweet and definitely the case for Daniel and Carolyn. He is waiting for her. Mary
Aria 2004-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked this. I agree with your theory as to why the Captain's still around. And it also fits with the book and the film - he's able to move on with Carolyn after she dies.