 Anigen 2008-07-20 . chapter 1PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write another chapter or a sequel to this its amazing |
 Haruka Minamino 2008-07-17 . chapter 1"I'll probably get flamed from Mr. Almighty of Bad Timing later on in life for worshipping the CuteBoy persona more than Him..."
You and me both. You and me both. 8D
Nice story. And your explanation makes sense, God "borrowing"/assuming an existing human form and exploiting it to torture poor Joan. XD |
 Scooby176 2006-06-13 . chapter 1i am like begging you to continue i beg further. its a great story and well written, i love the way you haven't turned adam into something horrible and i really really really want joan and chris to get together. great job. |
 Timber 2005-05-26 . chapter 1 That was cute! |
 jane 2004-10-28 . chapter 1 I loved the story.The character of chris is very intelligent. You are such a good writer and so smart. ( notice I'm sucking up so maybe you could continue the story.It feels like it's not complete) If you don't mind, did God have an assignemnt that involved chris? (did you have an assignment in mind with him) |
 Sylvia Sylverton 2004-10-17 . chapter 1Awesome story I loved the interaction between Joan and Chris. |
 clairekygal 2004-06-11 . chapter 1 Awesome story! Very original! And I just loved the scenes between Joan, CuteBoy!God, and Chris! Please, pretty please consider a sequal of some kind? I was kinda hoping to get a kiss between Joan/Christian. That would just be so cool! And can you image CBG response to THAT? Or what if Adam saw and thought his beloved Jane had been cheating on him behind his back, in spite of what she told him? LOL! Lot's of limitless potential for plotlines in case you really ARE interested in writing a sequal... |
 samthecg 2004-06-09 . chapter 1Whe! Ilove Cuteboy!God ficcage! I like the way you made it less... fluffy than most other fics. It wasn't about doing something for God, it was about figuring out what things meant, and I think that's... a better fic in general. Unless you need some fluff. Then fluff is good. But you can write the non-fluff, actually-like-the-show stuff. That's good. *goes off to read more fic* |
 All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-03-14 . chapter 1This is the best J/CBG (or however you want to look at it) fic I've run across BY FAR! This, even more so than other fics I've read, really FEELS like I'm watching part of a show's episode. I bow humbly to your talent. (bow) And if you wanted to write more with this idea, continuation, series of short fics, whatever, I certainly wouldn't object. (grin) You've made my day, and my favorites list! |
 Lei Suna 2004-02-21 . chapter 1I liked this! Is it weird that I like the whole Joan/CuteBoy!God ship? Damn him for being cute! lol. And yes, damn the chem. between Kris and Amber. |
 Lady Mercury 2004-02-13 . chapter 1Nice to see that I'm not the only one that likes CuteboyGod;)
Love the story! |
 mary 2004-01-24 . chapter 1 Brilliant story!
You've managed to capture the characters perfectly in this story; I felt like I was reading a script for series, it was so in tune. Interesting to explore the concept that God takes the form of people who already exist when he talks to Joan. Loved this story.
Hope to see more of your writing, and soon. |
 not4me 2004-01-22 . chapter 1WAIT WHAT ABOUT THAT OTHER VERY GORGEOUS GUY, CHRIS? DOES SHE CALL HIM?
email me at booksandcoffee1@yahoo.com
~Pheobe |
 Eraserhead 2004-01-22 . chapter 1Wow. Great story. Never even thought to think of CBG as resembling a real boy. |
 SpookyAnne 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 Bloody good story! I like it a lot! More please! I so wanna see another of this story. Thank you very much. |