 Avacados are evil 2006-05-30 . chapter 1O_O it's so ... neat. (is in total and complete awe) |
 Veriea Fornnan 2005-07-27 . chapter 1I liked this one alot. It stayed true to the characters and I particularly liked the way you dipicted Jack's off-handed attitude |
 Catmint 2004-11-05 . chapter 1This is brilliant. Wonderfully written, excellent characterisation...I could see it all playing out in my head!! |
 Trowa no Miko 2004-07-06 . chapter 1There was this GW fic that focused on hands in one of the scene. Heero was being nostalgic and was remembering a time when Duo was tweezing shards of broken glass out of Heero's hand and Hee-chan was comparing the two. Heero had soldier/blacksmith/pirate hands and Duo's were smooth and sexy. It was a pretty fic. Very amuzing. Anyway, sorry dearest. I'm just not into the movie fics as much as the anime/cartoon/game fic. You have a beautifully descriptive style, but I just couldn't get into it. Now that I've read all your fics, you're gonna have to move faster with that sequal. |
 Takada Saiko 2004-06-07 . chapter 1I liked! Great story! If you get a chance will you read mine please? |
 Sofia 2004-02-21 . chapter 1 I LIKE IT! ^_^ |
 Hotshot 2004-01-22 . chapter 1Wow, well i have to say this was really good. Mostly i read Newsies stuff but as of late there hasn't been too much in the update department. So i came here to find something interesting. Even for something posted yesterday i'm surprised you don't have more reviews. This is actually really good.
I find it very interesting when people write about the pieces that movies leave out, because no one knows what happens, no one knows how everyone feels or knows what was said. It's just sort of something you need to read.
And the thing about their hands was wicked cool. You never really trhink that Will accepts that he's a pirate but the end to this made me think. 'don't call me a gentleman; i work for a living.' i can't remember what book i read that in but your story reminded me of it so much.
I really hope you're planning on continuing this, or expanding on it. It would be very interesting if you went on more in will's point of view and his reflection and realization of what Jack said. If you don't it still has quite an effect but it's just a suggestion.
~Hotshot~ |
 piratelasses 2004-01-22 . chapter 1Hey, this story was pretty good. Was it your first? We have been working on our first PotC story too. I liked this story. I hope you write more soon! ^_^ |
 Captain Lane-I Sparrow 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 omg i loved it! i was gonna write my own version of wat happened on the Dauntless back to Port Royal but i cant top that! lol. seriously that was fantastic, hav u written anything else? |