 Anake14 2009-11-24 . chapter 18update please...this story is cool and refreshing, but i was wondering if you'd be willing to put a wedding in for naruchan and gaachan... |
 sousie 2009-11-14 . chapter 18update soon |
 harrylover101 2009-08-24 . chapter 18O.O UPDATE! |
 Ronyae 2009-08-11 . chapter 18 Aww man! Are you going to finish A New Path?! I'm not happy with yaoi but I don't think Naruto really fits with any of the girls from the anime. I've also read The Beginning of The End, please finish it too!! Other than asking you to please finish your stories, I wanted to tell you that I don't mind spelling or grammer mistakes that much, it gives each author their own style. I will keep checking your stories for updates and I want you to know that you are the first person I have ever felt strongly enough about a story to give a review to. Please keep writing!
--Ronyae |
 sam 2009-07-27 . chapter 18 this is awesome! but where is the rest of it? it was getting so good!! plz continue! |
 kudakoneko 2009-06-25 . chapter 18no! a cliff-hanged! and you haven't updated in years! I wanna see an epic battle! and I hope naruto gets away! |
 chellle 2009-06-18 . chapter 18I LOVE IT ! ITS FANTASTIC UPDATE SOON PLEASE!. |
 chellle 2009-06-17 . chapter 5i thought it was a great chapter it was cute. keep up the great work. |
 Double Spell 2009-04-17 . chapter 6*~“They just left, you and Jiraiya will cover the south section.” Tsunade replied~*
-i thought Gai said they would cover the east |
 Double Spell 2009-04-17 . chapter 4*~Gaara only lifted an eyebrow as he took another step forward towards the blond.~*
-O.O he has an eyebrow?! XD~! |
 Sally Mac 2009-04-14 . chapter 18 Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant! Only just discovered boys love stuff and really like the Naruto/Gaara pairing! Your story just drew me in and I couldn't stop reading it! Can't wait to find out what happens! Do Naruto and Gaara live happily ever after? What is Option 2? Please, please finish this story! It's really really good! Many thanks from Sally xx |
 Shyn ShikyoKokoro 2009-03-03 . chapter 18Gah! I go to read the next chapter and guess what you haven't updated! So now I have to wait...
...Damnit! I'm bored... ^~^ Hope you update soon for this loyal bored fan! |
 UnmeiHimitsu 2008-12-31 . chapter 18I'ma sad puppy...you haven't updated |
 Oujou-No-Tenshi 2008-12-30 . chapter 1As i was reading your story i was remineded of the song the kill by 30 seconds to mars you should look it up it works really good for your story. |
 JadePrincess 2008-11-25 . chapter 18 PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue! im addicted to it and i need to see it done! Please Keep Writing! =) |