more amazingness. love it.

heal my bleeding heart

did you base the fic off the title? or the title off the fic?

Oh I like that "It is the snake that bites it's own tail." very clever. And I love the little story too. Well done. ;)

"It is the snake that bites its own tail"

I love you.

"Her black hair brushes his hands. She is seventeen and not innocent. The ground beneath them is so green."
I like that contrast between colors and what you might expect of Bella before joining the Death Eaters, but apparently she is already not quite pure. The full circle with the 'love' is very nice; the last sentence was especially evocative in both its meanings.
"...night covers the sky."
Very beautiful image.
In all, lovely story!
- Linaeve

Neat. I really shouldn't leave a review that simply says "neat" especially since "neat" isn't exactly the word I'd use to describe this fic, except I have. And "neat" does fit in a weird way. Because it's not the usual thing you find, but works Oh So Well considering it's supposed to be a dream. Because it follows dream-logic and dream-time without going overboard as so many dreamfics do. It almost makes sense, as much as any dream makes sense. I think it's more like it made sense while I was reading it but didn't make sense when I thought about it. Like a proper dream does. Or something like that. I'm beginning to think maybe I should be dreaming myself, instead of reading. And babbling. But just because I'm tired doesn't mean I wouldn't have enjoyed it just as much normally. Because it's an excellent story. God. I'm so sorry for rambling on like this.

Okay. And I'll admit. I practically squealed at the "Bellatrix loves Sirius" bit.

Intresting. Shows the psycopath she really is :) read 'Killing Spree' for more Bellatrix stories

Wow.
This is so mesmerizing and so incredibly beautiful in such a twisted way.

Beautiful. I really liked this.

Interesting...

WOW. I am just at a loss for words. This is just so GREATLY ironic. WOW.
"TOM LOVES BELLA LOVES SIRIUS LOVES JAMES LOVES LILY LOVES HARRY LOVES GINNY LOVES TOM." and at the end... "Rain pours down.
She drowns.
Wakes.
In a way, she likes that it has come full circle. It is the snake that bites its own tail."
Wow, I so totally get this and its so wierd and scary and just wow. EEP! Such a short piece and just so deep! I loved it! You truly are talented. I don't do the Harry/Ginny ship, but it's true, she loves him, (Or just a crush) and if all of that did happen, what a wierd full circle... and now I'm just rambling so I'll stop! GREAT JOB!

Interesting. Bizarre, even. Very well-written though even for a piece that is entirely obscure hehehe. Really enjoyed it. Great. Keep writing!