   masterjc 2007-07-22 . chapter 1I want more |
 Kenhime 2004-01-23 . chapter 1*claps loudly* ^_^
I like how you described the future. The feeling of time didn't seem like dawn to me...it felt like it had taken place at dusk. But I enjoyed the feeling of peace and realization of dreams that this exudes. It's...it's something I would imagine would happen to Konohamaru and Naruto.
Thank you for writing this, and I am looking forward to reading more stories of Naruto from you! |
| Bishiehuggler 2004-01-23 . chapter 1 O.O *very impressed* A Konohamaru story! You don't see those everyday! I enjoy the way this is written, too. Very serene and thought provoking. Keep it up! |
| too bored to put my name in 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 CONTINUE OR DIE! |
| Gemin16 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 Pretty good...
Its fun to think how they will act in the future and you captured it well. Hehe, Konohamaru sounds so mature..It's hard to imangine because all you ever see him do is fool around, hehe. I hope you write more stories like this, they really are good. |
| Xoni Newcomer 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 Wonderful. Excellent narrative style and very good portrayal of Naruto and Konohamaru, as well as great insight into their thinking procedures. I hope you write more Naruto (or other fandom's) fics. |
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