Aww, so sweet.. I think I've read this a long time ago though, when I didn't have an account

I really enjoyed this; its great the way you used the five senses grea swing to a story!

I should start writing some soon.. when my vocab extends -

-YamiZu

I like it. I though it was very nice. Something different which wasn't bad.

I like your style. Simple and elegant.

I also like the idea behind the story. the six senses were good...the characterization was pretty good too...

I DO think you could have done better(?)

there are some parts that I felt could have been worded differently/better. But what am I saying, it's your work, not mine.

like i said, nice style. beautifully written.

This is so pretty. Nice. I love the writing style too. Good job!

That was very very interesting

sweet desu! are you going to add another chapter to this? either way this is amazing!

WHOAH! THAT WAS AWESOME! Def. SEXY! Hehehe. Where'd you go online? *pout* You went poofy!

hehehehe.

My new AIM is Vivitarium!

W00tW00t! Keep on bustin out YGO! (Haven'tr read much recently) V.V

*eagerly awaits the next short*

*gnaws on it* _

The five senses...that so together and so...complete! How could I say it in better terms?

cool story. don't think anyone would hate it, except for the fact that it's kinda dull next to the other bakura/ryou fics i've read. but keep up the great writing!

...n_n Heehee...me likies...and that's a good thing, seeing as I'm EXTREMELY picky in my fanfiction when it comes to this pairing. _*Sticks this on favorites*

Well, I didn't hate it. In fact, I thought it was beyond interesting. The thing about the senses would be an intruiging way to make a fic. Its what I think anyway. It managed to catch my attention. I loved it!
-Zorra Lombardi

No hate, very like...why? I think it's a cute original, and I just love cute original stuff...*big smile*
Yami:_ Where's the cute Yuugi and me?
Me:*sweatdrop*...
A: Face it Yami
D:Not many people come up with fluff of you two any more
A:Nope, it's Ryou and Bakura
D:Or Seto and Jounouchi
Yami:*closes ears*
Me:*laughs* I wish for...oh right, one shot...*sweatdrop* NNyways, loved it lots. _ Glad you made it

*sigh contently* That was so sweet! Why is the spur-of-the-moment stuff comes out better? I really liked it. I'll probably read it again sometime.

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