Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Help
Reviews For: My Birthday Gift
Jack Mitchell 2008-09-21 . chapter 2
You hoped Chapter too wasn't too naughty? For real?! Hate to point this out but you didn't actually do anything. He kissed her shoulders, you skipped the part in between, and then he left.

That's not an R rating, that's barely a T rating. In fact it's almost a kids movie!

Naughty indeed...wow...you need to get some more kindyness going on if you want it to be an R or M rating.
fabiola yume 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
Hi!
This fic is really good! I loved it!
I want to read all of them, but I chose this to start because it´s about gigolo joe!
And of course you can translate my fic Eu sou, eu fui! I liked the idea, and thank you very much for the attention!
Hugs
shining-suicide 2004-09-13 . chapter 3
Hey, I liked this story! but personally I would have rated it PG-13, just because there's some fluff in it! :P but yeah, it was great, when I was first reading it, I thought it was going to be Joe! lol.

xXPEACEXx
Return to Top