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Second daughter of Eve 2008-01-31 . chapter 3
Can I be a student? I really like this. What story did you get the idea from? I could see A OFU for Harry Potter...
Eve
Mari Braveheart 2007-08-15 . chapter 3
I'd guess that the blue stuff is Turkish delight. I have no clue what the dress is; you haven't really given us much description besides oddly familiar but unrecognisable. = )

I do have a few questions. Since, in canon, the Shadowlands Narnia was destroyed, are the fanwriters going to the real Narnia or are they going to a copy of the Shadowlands?

Also, since, besides Susan, all the canon characters are dead - in the real world - when they come back would they be perfect beings or imperfect beings? Jadis and the Lady of the Green Kirtle would obviously be more petty, small, and evil than before, and the good characters would be more good and brave and valiant than before.

And what about Susan? How is she going to react to being brought back to Narnia to teach? I'd wager that the students would fear her on a level with Anja. She'd be more dangerous and with more hate for fangirls than pretty much anyone else, when you think about all the sappy Susan-redemption fics there are. Of course, Peter and Edmund would be angry as well, knowing that their sister was worthy of more than an ill-written, purply prose fanfiction, being as chivalrous as they are. And Lucy - well, she is the Valiant.

Hope the ideas help!
RainbowWerewolf 2007-03-14 . chapter 3
I like the 'I don't think I'm in Kansas anymore line. Read my story if you please. I'm need reveiws! I love it write more! Who is Mary-Sue(ch. 1)
NotReallyAnything 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
I honestly can't say why I haven't looked for this yet, being such a fan of OFUM and my own OFATT, but OMFG! I have to admit, I was a bit jealous when I saw you got to write this (as I am the number One fan of C.S. Lewis and an expert on everything Narnian)...but I'm sure it's good. And if not...well...you'll see. ^_~*
Cygna-hime 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Hello! *waves* Wish to report discovery of mini-dragons 'Narian' and 'narnian' in a Suefic. One of the PPC agents who was working on said Suefic would like to adopt 'Narian', if it's all right by you.

Keep up the good work!
Red RoseDragon 2006-05-01 . chapter 3
*gigglesnort*

I can't wait to see what sort of hassling these fangirls go through. It gives me warm and fuzzy feelings. Almost as much as torturing actual canon characters... XD
Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarnian 2006-04-30 . chapter 3
*Gasps* OFUN! A branch of OFUM! And you have mini-dragons!

Speaking of Mini-dragons, I've spotted one for you: Peer. Actually made in a copyrited book published by Disney! Its not in fanfiction, but I'm sure someone misspelled it somewhere.

I loved reading OFUM, so I'm guessing that this will be awesome. (Just a note, you probably want to keep this a bit... more family-friendly than the original. You must remember that Narnia appeals to a wider audience than LOTR, as it reaches kids, too. You must admit that OFUM was not appropriate for a twelve-year-old, who might find this one.)

Poor Rosie Took. I only hope this poor hobbit-lass knows what she's getting into. *shudders*

I LOVE the rivalry between Jadis and the Green Witch. (Reminds me of Sauron-Morgoth!) Seems like it could add some humor (and danger!)

I'd enroll, except the very first fanfic I read (4 years ago!)was a watered-down version of an OFUM-like fic. It explained why Sues were so wrong, so I never got started on them. (I'm an angst fan) But, I suppose if you find yourself needing another student, you could always contact me. I'd be happy to help. Narnia needs an OFU, the place is almost overrun with sues, slash, and incest.

more soon! Update! Save Narnia!
KaterineKasdorf 2006-04-23 . chapter 3
This really looks promising. Oh, please do have Tumnus teach a course about being a faUn, not a faWn!
saeros-erendyl 2006-04-15 . chapter 3
Hope you update soon!

I did catch a spelling error though.

Anja waited a moment for the stbale to clear, then made her way over to miss Ash’s table.
The Leaky Pen 2006-04-01 . chapter 3
Is it... Blello? This is assuming that Blello is a way of saying Blue Jello and not the horrible color implemented in HFA. At any rate, I look forward to your continuing. And perhaps I shall send you a fanbunny of my own to educate. ^^
Stormtracer 2006-03-27 . chapter 3
I really like this story, and while I would normally offer constructive critism, I honestly can't think of any at the moment.

So...*hands ashwing cookies* Good job on a good story! ;D
mis.mira 2006-03-07 . chapter 3
I'd bet the mini food is Turkish Delight:)
EvilExpressions 2006-01-03 . chapter 1
Good fic. :) Can't wait till you update.
steelelf 2005-12-30 . chapter 3
Antifreeze?
Lobo Diablo Lone Wolf 2005-12-11 . chapter 3
Mwahahahaha, yes, I can quite safely say I'm enjoying this, Fanfiction Universities are always fun, I think I'll enrol, have some fun. XD

Oh, and the mini-food, turkish delight is it?
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