this is a very good story i look forward to reading more of your work

koolness...

Her name is actually Unazuki...and her hair color is kind of an orange/red. Also, I take it that you are pairing Kunzite with Zoicite...though, I personally like the Senshi/General pairing, I guess I understand why you paired them up the way you did. ^_~

I like this story so far. It's different than the normal post stars stories about the origin of Crystal Tokyo. I like the way you've interpreted it (though I'm still iffy about the pairings. ^_~). Watch for grammer mistakes, I noticed a few of those, but they happen...so don't worry too much about it. Anyway, I hope that you can update soon, because it really is a good story. ^_^

wow ... this is really good ^^ .. very interesting to .. i like it it's different and i like the style .. ^^ .. anyways .. great job!! .. hope you update soon!! =)

I can't wait to see what happens when the unconcious awaken and use some sort of super powers against queen Beryl.

That is cool especially when mister Shingo can use magic and they can't. I wonder why tough? You'll probably explain that next chapter.

Ok, what happens next? I'm "dying" to know. This story could be confusing but it isn't, so glad about that. Hope you update soon. ja ne! ^_^;;

Good chapter! update soon!

nice but plz put more Makoto in it

Good story update soon!