This was awesome! You have a very 'flowy' way of writing, wery smoothly put together. I enjoyed it alot. Keep up the good work.

DOwn with slash!!

You've got it! You wrote very well and descriptively, captured what you wanted with only a few paragraphs, and left the reader feeling curiously moved.

wow. that was powerful.
aragorn's my favorite character, and i havent read anything like that.