Wow, what an orginal story.

I actually read this story last week and only got around to reviewing it now. Ever since then I have had little flashbacks to this story, little images of how I pictured it all playing out. It was a nice relief from my reality. Thank you.

Lisa :)

I absolutely love this, so understated but perfect

I liked that a lot. That's all I really have to say. Sorry I can't be more helpful, but I just really loved that.

"The young man glances down at her lap and a soft wonder briefly glints his eyes before he dons the mask again, leaving the audience to speculate if they indeed saw a falter of emotion."
^^and that was my favorite line. A lot of people use that idea in their stories, but I really like the way you phrase it

Sheer brilliance. I loved the style of this, it was excellent. One of the more interesting fics I have read. Wonderful.

Its really nice and sweet. You ahve a kewly writing style! nways. yeah. really loved it. Um... yeah. Was Syd pregnant?? cause I thought so,... with the abdomen thingy. ya. meh.

This was wonderful. I loved the pov of the driver. It was very unique.
I have a huge lump in my throat now. It was just so sad to me. And, you have Sydney and Sark nailed. The characterization is amazing.

This story was absolutely fantastic! Can't think of much more than that. Amazing, definitely one of the best I've ever read.

Honestly, words cannot express how this made me feel. It was a vivid picture that you painted with this story.
The only part that I didn't quite understand was the "It's quite not, so he doesn’t even begin to try." I'm not sure what you meant by that.
I loved the stubborn-ness that you gave both of them, particularily with Sark's line “I’m doing this alone. You won’t change my mind.

//Or of how sometimes he eyes her when she’s not paying attention, uncomfortably looking like a man who has no clue as to how he got so fortunate. Or her, when doing the same to him, but her expression laced with sorrow. Almost as if she waits for the day he will betray her, or worse, she’ll have to betray him.// Oh, Nic darling, you've totally captured them... their individuality shines through in everything you've written in this piece...
Dark, short and sweet, and a fabulous perspective from an outsider... Loved everything about it :)

That was just excellent! the third-party view into those two spoke volumes. Very well written. I enjoyed reading this story very much.

that was great! very different! very nice!

Utterly fantastic. The idea is so original and real. I would love to see Sark or Sydney's side of the story.