This story has a very nice concept, and the idea is truely enjoyable, but I feel inclined to point out that you have to much lyrics compared to how much story you have.

When reading a songfic, a lot of people will simply skip through the lyrics, and even though you have the idea for a truely great fic, you don't give it time to develop.

A lot of the "text" becomes ping-pong speaking. and this doesn't convey feelings, as deep as those you are dealing with in this fic, very well.

Also your probelms seem to be solved a little too easily, like Boromir is one s his little brother didn't do it. It seem a little easy. Perhaps you should have found a way for Faramir to prove it wasn't him. This would also have helped the story have more action.

So if you gave it some more description and some more insight into the persons feelings, instead of just hearing what they say, I think this could be a truely magnificent story.

This is not a flame, but I just wanted to tell you what I think of it.

Please write on, it is the only way to improve, trust me, I'm still in the proces...

Great Story

that was awesome...not many Boromir.Faramir stories out there!

The real age difference is five years. Boromir would be about twenty-one.
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Interesting story. It was short, and perhaps a bit. . .I'm not sure what to say. It sort of seemed to lack a body. If you described a bit more and had a few more explanations, this would make a very good story though. I liked it.