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| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-24 ch 21,  | abuseThis was an enjoyable story. I liked it verymuch. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-24 ch 20, | abuseAh...okay...interesting end. I liked this. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-24 ch 19, | abuseAha! finally they kissed. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-24 ch 18, | abuseOkey-doke, that was a good chapter. Oh, and that one chaopter with the bath scene, I totally forgot, but I think it was "From Hell". |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 15, | abuseThis was a good chapter. I love the comentary on the movie. It's amusing. and yeah, I agree with you for El missing Sands being the preist and stuff. I love how that was Johnny's idea, that way they didn't need someone else and he could come up with another disguise. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 14, | abuseNice ending. I think I know what your gonna do. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 13, | abuseThis was a nice chapter. I don't like El very much here. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 12, | abuseNice chapter. Cool. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 11, | abuseHahahahaha, that's funny. I loved how Sands got one up on El. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 10, | abuseThis was good. I couldn't concentrate through the last part because My sister had to be stupid and shreik in my ear. Brat. Anyway, this was goo. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 9, | abuseNicely done. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 8, | abuseNice fight. I liked how you wrote the actionb scene. It's very nice. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abuseOh...nice... |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseSands totally manipulated him again. Hahaha, that was funny. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseYou killed of El's friends? that is so not nice. But it was a good plot twist. |