Jack's DEAD? HOW? What happened?

um...wasn't Norrington's window locked when he went 2 bed? I'm confused. wait a minute...nope, still don't get it.

Good story. I love a bit of melancholy! Although, I don't really see James Norrington EVER being friends with Will Turner.

O! I love it! The whole it was nothing but a dream ends are vrey weak, but you my friend did a lovely job at it! Kudos!

Oh dear that's sad

Wow. This is really good. Did you write more?

Thank you for sharing.

emotive, in character, all the good stuff. and i get a nice little chill from it...

::thumbs up:: Sparrington! Huzzah! _ Interesting and very intruiging. You know, you should consider continuing this. There's a tale there, waiting to be told... ::winks::

...You better as hell write a sequel to this, or I'll set undead pirates on your amazingly talented ass!

Ah, nice. I liked the ending particularly. :)