I liked it.

Nice! But how about a challenge to write another chapter or two? Like where it's going with Sara's vlnerability, explanation about the rape cases she always takes. Think about it ;)

sweet

Nice start! I hope you continue!

Such a powerful story. You did a great job bringing us back through Sara's reverse chronology, which showed that her trust in Catherine was ever-increasing. Very sweet.
P.S. Excellent use of paraentheses, too!