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| csimouse 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. |
| SophiaCSI28 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseNice! But how about a challenge to write another chapter or two? Like where it's going with Sara's vlnerability, explanation about the rape cases she always takes. Think about it ;) |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusesweet |
| little me 2004-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice start! I hope you continue! |
| Drakkenfyre 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abuseSuch a powerful story. You did a great job bringing us back through Sara's reverse chronology, which showed that her trust in Catherine was ever-increasing. Very sweet. P.S. Excellent use of paraentheses, too! |