I am hunched over like a madman, cackling with glee! HOORAY FOR MEWTWO!

a black mew . . . that totally KICKS BUTT!!

all of his evilness has aged him, like Palpatine!

I honestly started laughing when i read the "I am your father" bit

Nice ending although I didn't think Ash could have a child due to his form.

A Mew? Now that was different. I almost thought you killed him.

Starwars huh. I should of guessed that by your other stories. I liked that part. The story went a bit fast but then again pokemon is like that.

Oh she's a pokemon! That makes the fight more humorous.

It's a little odd that cat is not surprised Ash has a super rare pokemon.

Woot! Way to go! ^^ This is a awesome fic and you did a great job- I can't wait for the sequel!

that was a great story, and a great ending,
so that how Ash turned into a mew, i thought he will remember when mewtwo and mew fought and he got in the middle thing and thats how he got his powers. anyways ur a very good writer and u put good detail and describion in it, the best i read so far.
keep it up. ;)

I coudl almost see it coming when ASh said, "I heard you killed my father." I'm a starwars ntu my self so i was laughing out loud when you did the "No I am your father scene in thsi story pokemon style. I enjoyed the sotry a lot.

update plz!!

I'll confess. No, I did not. That was a surprise. Good. Surprises are often good.

and even Mrs. Ketchum
That's just wrong. Well, for good I mean, come on, NEVER telling her?

If you do have a sequel in mind. While the voting system is what makes this tale interesting, make sure you have a course in your head.

I think he should have kept the tail. Hehehe.