Brilliant story! Such an original take on the Founders... your story had me laughing (Salazar meeting 'Tommy') and crying (Chapter 19). Such poignancy in your writing. It's a shame you only have one story written.

Lovely story. Just read it the whole way through. This is the first Snape is Salazar story I've read. Usually they are Harry is Salazar.

some how i stumbeld upon this story and i must say i love it.. verry good written! and interesting tale

A little late to read it perhaps...

Very nice I must say...

A pity it ended where it did, but written in such a (good) way that it would have been a pity for it to continue...

Brilliant job!

- QuannanHade

I'm really liking the story. I think Harry needs to do that. I think his sprit would be a small child too. Stuck in his cupboard. Severus did need that. He's gonna be really different.

Oh my… The begining were Slytherin hugged Voldie was so funny. I had a mental image for most of this chapter of Snape with a giddy smile, bouncing around, and hugging Voldie. I fell out of a chair laughing and had trouble stopping for at least five minutes. The mental image made my start laughing again and I hit my head. I love it when stories give me mental images, it makes the story so much more life like. Great plot line. Amazing writing. Very good. I would shorten the paragraphs a bit as it gets to be harder to read the longer they are. There's enough action to be exciteing without not having a real plot. Wonderfully done. Off to read the next chapter.

Lovely, poignant chapter, this. I'm glad to have found the story for this chapter alone.

I've enjoyed this tale thoroughly, and am sad to see that I'm almost at the end.

I'm pleased that Salazar is leaving Severus in a good place, however.

Thanks!

I absolutely love your story! Out of the 205 really good stories i've read on , your's is definitely the most well written! The interractions between Godric and Salazar are hilarious, and you've portrayed Salazar's character just as i imagined he would be.

What a great story! Very well written, uh, it just seem like there should be so much more... I loved it

I feel the need to congradulate you on a story well-written. The interesting and non-chiche storyline and interaction of the characters made for a very good read. In fact, I read it in one sitting. You may also be interested to know that I'm one of those annoying readers who only reveiw a small fraction of the stories I read.

i can't believe it's over i loved it so much best story ever please write a part 2 please =) love Snape

finally Snape can have a life loved the chapter brillen i feel so sorry for him and Salazar

that was so sad that made me want to cry i couldn'lt believe it poor Snape i'll miss Slytherin

Salazar Slytherin really is a strange guy he can be a bit of a bastard at tiems but other times in nice anda he just wants to talk about his self and he can be likeably and i think will miss him when he's gone

o grap this is not good poor Snape