 Freaking Cage 2009-01-09 . chapter 3"At least he wasn’t wearing the purple outfit today."
What a way to look on the bright side Konzen. :D |
 Freaking Cage 2009-01-09 . chapter 2Jeep (Jiipu) speaking in Haikus is so clever! I'm laughing all the way through this. Especially with Sanzo. Oh man, there is nothing like a good round of Mary Sue bashing. |
 Freaking Cage 2009-01-09 . chapter 1I love the Three Aspects. "...yet We must have ordered her to join the group, for She has." Who can lose with logic like this?
"It was the most aesthetically pleasing wound I've ever seen in my life," ftw.
Oh Gojyo made me laugh! Poor thing, really. |
 ms.swirlyglasses 2008-01-21 . chapter 4LMAO XD that was so funny!! |
 Cyh Scaevola 2006-07-21 . chapter 4you are my heroine.
(take that statement howsoever thou wishest.)
Plague take the fool who stifles the madness!! GRARG!
=_= ~*(cyh)* |
 Leencz 2006-06-18 . chapter 4 " His brain had dissolved in the face of presence of all the Negative Intelligence. (Like the Minus Wave, only worse.) Sometimes, it didn't pay to be the smartest one..."
"Kenren had backed up against the far wall, and was searching desperately for a sword (at least, a sword other than the one the Fangurls wanted him to use.) "No, look, Tenpou would kill me," he protested."
"Enough!" Kanzeon scowled. Thunder crashed, and several Fangurls hid under the tables. "I don't need to compete with you pathetic creatures, with your petty little squabbles. I am Kanzeon Bosatsu, Goddess of the Western Ocean, and the Official Fangurl in Saiyuki. And unlike you creatures, I belong here, and I don't share." She drew herself up, and several of the less confident Fangurls crept away in a sudden pang of inferiority (that combined with their hormones to become suicidal depression, and they all wrote death fics before proceeding to kill themselves off.)
The rest, as they say, is History."
Pure...evil...genius... See! I can randomly place parts of your story into a review! YAY! |
 Leencz 2006-06-18 . chapter 3 MWAHA! I REVIEW AGAIN *gaspeth*
Poor, poor, poor, Poor, pOor, poOr, pooR...you get it...innocent Goku. Do you really think heaven continued its existence after the rampage of the *whisper* fangirls. I CAN HEAR THE CRICKETS CHIRPING
Please
update. You last updated in 04...but still...and add a Kanzeon dieary entry...
PLEASE |
 Leencz 2006-06-18 . chapter 2 "Goku is regressing back to childhood. I fear that the Clue Hammer of DOOM only restores good sense, but not personalities."
All hail the Clue Hammer of DOOM and Solaas who apparently donated the mystical weapon. MARYSUE IS NOT A **...
She's just emotionally unstable because she lost her mother/father/adoptive cousins/relavtives/pet meercat/religion/virginity/siblings/faults/etc. at a bery young age. But her amazingness has returned her to the right path of sanity and kindness to fellow man, even though her icy heart can only be melted by the -some random 'hot' anime guy-
SEE PREVIOUS THREAT WITH FISH... |
 Leencz 2006-06-18 . chapter 1 OMFG LOL!
Ok, the first impression that i am insane is incorrect. -OH PENGUINS!
*Ahem* There had to be a Mary Sue basher here I KNEW IT! ANNIHALATE WITH THE DEVOURING PERUVIAN FISHES OF DOM!
You have a few grammar errors. One tense thing problem, but i was to busy laughing to notice much more.
CONTINUE OR I SHALL STAB YOU WITH A SPORK |
 Sekowari 2006-02-25 . chapter 4Wow, scary...I shall never interact with fangurls ever again...Meep...^^ |
 Sekowari 2006-02-25 . chapter 2Is it just me, or is the Mary-Sue very annoying? ...Is that a good thing? ^^ Mehehehehe... |
 Sekowari 2006-02-25 . chapter 1Mehehehe...great fanfic! Keep up the good work! |
 CTHKSI 2006-01-27 . chapter 4 OFC...XDD!
Hilarious. :] |
 Blahsblah2001 2006-01-16 . chapter 4Yes, fangirls are exessively retarded. And you're good at mocking them. (Checks tally sheet and grins at excessive fangurl death count)
Question: Does loving 58s make me a fangurl? I'm not that retarded I swear... and I'm only up to 52 fics...
_melissa |
 Noroi 2005-09-21 . chapter 1Great. Reminds me of a anti-marysue fic I once read. It was a Lord of the Rings one that had the diary thing as formatting. Can't remember what it was called. This was pretty cool and I promise that I'll read the rest later.
Peace Out. |