In its shortness, it is extortionately interesting. You're really good at drabbles you know (unlike me T__T). But I think you're at your best when you are being descriptive. I haven't encountered any drabble as engaging as this. Honestly. ^_^

Keep up!

please continue this...*begs*
can't wait what's going to happen next.
you'll continue this, right?

I loved it! The interaction between the two is very ... powerful ...
I can't wait to read more Ryota/Ayako fic from you.

there's a lot to it, i could sense. but then, it's a little too short, hope you'll make it longer though. just get it on and i'll be waiting how this story develops. ;)

short, but powerful in its own way. it could stand on its own, no matter how few the words are. leaves a lot of room for possibilities and imagination [for the reader's part]. really cool fic!

nice...if this isn't a one-shot, please continue

nice. maybe you could continue this if you want. but i think you can make ayako not to ooc right? anyway, thats just a suggestion =)