 Beaubier 2004-01-25 . chapter 1It's really lovely to see him get to be...
well, a dad.
He shoulda been. But she died. He'd make a great dad. I'm glad you decided to continue in your Jubilee and Northstar series. They do indeed work well together, probably because they both say what they mean, and mean what they say, and aren't ashamed of anything. It's nice, when Austen is ignoring such things, to find that someone has taken notice.
Excellent writing on this one, the description was prettily done, and flowed very well. Cheers to you for this one ;) -Beaubier- |