This is terrible. Good thing you didn't continue this.

but who will she choose in the end the 'dog-boy' or the 'dragon-boy? (only know how to spell haku's name, not the other, just make it fair)

..wow. This sucks. Seriously.

Your writing style is underdeveloped, at best. Your descriptions are childish and bland, and, at times, nonexistant, and some of this stuff is just..stupid.

You got more canon facts wrong than I really care to count, you mention stupid crap in parenthesis where it isn't necessary at all, your grammar (or lack thereof) makes it look like a seven-year-old is writing this, and, all in all, you can't write.

For the love of god, get a beta, or don't post at all.

kayla- ~sigh~ u HAD to do a clify. 8pulls back curen to show me lying on the floor twiching*
kayla- update before she hits murder state! Cause if sh-
me- AH! WHERES MY AX!?
kayla- run.

i know it's been forever since you updated but seriously, work on your writing. it's a good idea and all, but you don't have the skill to make it a good story.

cool. please continue soon!

This is a great start but why haven't you updated? Its good! Please update! Youre gonna make me cry! T.T

Please Update!

I hope that you update real soon, I really love this story!

Hey nice story!
I like the plot!
Please update! P^^P (It menas two thumbs up)

I like your story,so update please! Really I do

Cool! Great xover. Please up-date soon! I realy realy wanna know what happends next

yay! A SAIY xover! PERFECT! i totally have to redo my story ike that..ugh..the chapters are screwed up...T.T *sigh* but yeah, this is good. yawp yawp! please upadte again soon! its wonderful! plz plz pzl update soon! plz! kay, im out, this is great,
-Sly

That was an interesting start to your story. please update soon.
buh-bye

Hey nice story! I just want to sya, that your story is preety good, but he part that you wrote at the end is preety not good. cause No face doesn't speak anything, except nod his hand. Keep up the good work1