THIS WAS...AMAZING!

i loved the relationship between Harry and Heather, you shoudl write more stories like this or make this one with chapters cause its really good!

Woah, neat-o. Some nice reference from SH3 here. Will you be continuing this? I sure hope so...

Wowe.
This was lovely. Extremely well written, and vivid, especially the part about the floor.

this is really good so far! intense. keep it up!