that was brilliant. I don't know the song (I guess it was a song, right?) in italics but it worked out all the same, and the second persona-form made it almost too personal, it hit me right in the heart. beautiful.

:sniffle: that was very very very very (i think you get the point) good. ^_^ i wouldn't change a thing.

Beautiful is the only way I can think to describe this. You are very, very talented at displaying these deep emotions through thoughts and through character actions. It's the perfect James/Sirius piece. Just lovely.