this is a pretty good story going on here nice job )

Good story.

Tremors is my favorite movies and I would love to see something happen to the graboids, like going through an old nevada test site (like area 51) and eating nuculer waste that causes them to grow to like 200 feet and look diffirent and have more hunting methods

great story

i am a great fan of tremors good idea to bring back earl and val with rhonda and kate keep up the good work

Great job with this story. I'm a big fan of Tremors and like the idea of Val and Earl coming back to Perfection.

Can't wait to read the rest.

Sorry for the shortness of this chapter. I hadn't updated in a while so I thought i should put what I had writen up. Life has been really busy with college and all. I promise to get more up this summer.

this is good! i can actually picture it in my mind, you are a really good writer! please update soon!

You SO have to finish this story! This is great; a whole reunion! No Heather, please, we so don't need the ackwardness!

Cool! Val and Rhonda! It's great to have them back in Perfection! But please bring everybody into town! You can't have just Jodi and Burt. (And Twitchell, yuck)

Very nice, I've waited for a while for someone to hit Twitchell, I just wish it had been Burt. Oh well, great story. I hope you update soon! Very nice.

This is a promisingly quirky story I can't wait to see some more, hint hint.
Oh man and I have waited too long for the return of Val! Very cool.