Next chapter?

I really enjoyed this. You certainly have created the atmosphere and style of the books, and even the little bits of humor. Very lively dialog, everyone in character, a couple of distinctive and interesting OCs, a pleasure to read. Nice job on the puzzles, too.

You're probably aware of this, but you slipped into present tense sometimes - the only real technical complaint I have.

I see this hasn't been updated in a while - a long while - but I hope to see more.

Very good and long story you've got here; please update soon!

And how can anyone not be a H/G & R/Hr fan?!

Wow! This is really, really good! Bravo :)

For the first time I've actually found a fiction that the characters are in character. God, I can't even do that! Plus these are nice, long chapters (I hate it when people take forever to update then it's only about 5,0,0 words).

You've got an interesting concept as well, with the sorcerer and stuff. Again, much better than I could ever do *shrugs*.

I only have three small bits of criticism (not that I'm flaming or anything but I hate it when I make a mistake and prefer to have it pointed out so I can improve).

1. This is all written in past tense, but there are some bits that are written in present tense.

e.g.
The two share a look, knowing that the other is thinking the same thing.

2. When Harry is talking to Locke about the previous DADA teachers you spelt 'Gilderoy' as 'Golderoy'.

3. Most of the time the characters have good normal conversation but there are some parts when it seems a little stiff and scripted.

That's all, but again I have to stress that I LIKE THIS STORY!

*Looks pleadingly* Update? Please?

Mr.Lupin? I thought they just called him Lupin

this is cool. i love the jesse plunk guy and his house elf... teeheehee. bet hermione did too! post more soon??

cool story!

I like it alot.

Please continue the story! I like the idea of Harry having a relitive. And this Plunk guy... He's weird, cool, slightly funny, and powerful all in one. Reminds me of Dumbledore...Anyway, add more soon!

I love your story, please update soon!

Great story. I love the long chapters, and the ideas - especially a Dursley being a Muggle-born wizard!
One thing, wouldn't Harry have certain aspects of the Muggle-born logic, being Muggle-raised, or was he so isolated from everyone, he never really had a chance?
Are any of them Sorcerers? It would be quite interesting for Harry, Neville and Locke to *all* be Sorcerers, don't you think? Harry has the destiny, Neville has the knowledge of them, and Locke has the brains.
Anyway, keep up the good work, and update soon.
Lol, Tanydwr

good story. I like the rubix cubes. Can't wait to see more of Dier. I have a few plans for a story similar, just never wrote. Now that I have found yours, I won't have too. lol
Looking forward to your next update. Happy writing.

are you sure that wasn't a pun on tommy boy's name?

I like Plunk's personality. Keep writing and update soon!

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