Oh man I got tired of all the arguing, is there character development or what? If it wasn't the fact I'm a big RA/AK match up I would give up reading already. BTW, you put Ranma like a damn jerk all the time, even when they already know how they feel and had gone trought all those problems already.

BRAVO! BRAVO Elidibus!
This is quite posibly the best to date Ranma conclusive continuation finales! The action was great and really well detailed. The romantic growth and further character development is superb. The way everything was tied up neatly with everyone one else in the Ranma verse is great, especially the pair ups of Shampoo/Mousse and Ukyo/Ryoga. And a doubly happy ending just made it perfect! I must say though, you're an EVIL author for the nightmare sequence of Akane's! ;)
On the technical note, the writing itself is also great, just how well the discriptive, thought, and dialogue writing comes together so seemlessly and fluid just makes it all that much better.
Really top shelf, A+ story.
Thanks much.

first akane can never beat ranma he trand all his life and she trand hard for days she is not this good ranma beat a god hello come on

They censored the url in my Chapter 2 review. Search on google for "Tendo House Layout"; should be the first hit.

Pretty good fic you got here. I wanted to point out a few errors I've notices while reading though. First of all, in the first chapter you misspelled "wedding" twice in the first paragraph. Also I wanted to point out that in the Tendo house the bathroom is downstairs (A nice layout can be found at ). Besides the errors I've found, this is a proving to be a pretty good fic.

I'm not quite sure how Akane went from being the emotionally out-of-control, poorly trained fiance, to the superior of Shampoo, the lifelong warrior, in just five days, basically training on her own, and learning killing chi techniques that should logically take very much longer. This really does lower the believability of the character (within the general context of the Ranma 1/2 universe).

Me: PLEASE CHECK YOUR E-MAIL!

Ranma: You don't have to scream, you know!

Me: oh, sorry!

>- Shiroi Inazuma

Great Story overall. I think most of the characters acted the ways they would. A few comments though, I agree with who ever said Akane would not have gotten that strong in so little time. Maybe what I mean to say is I'm a bit disappointed that Ranma didn't have a new move to try out in desperation. After all, in the months that this story spanded I think Ranma would have spent alot of time training himself seeing as he was training everyone else. You did extremely well on that dream thing! I'm usualy tired of dreams like that because its so obvious that they are a dream and not real. You pulled it off amazingly. GREAT JOB! write a story that spands the 9 months : )

awesome story.. especially soome of the fight scenes. the only major problem i had was Akane's rapid development on her own. call me sexist if you want, but it just didn't seem right that akane gain that much skill and strength on her own. i mean, if she could have done on her own, wouldn't she have been at that level by the time Ranma arrived. you can't say it was because of the level of competition either, because Kuno and Kodachi were there and they were of a slightly higher skill level. but anyway, awesome job, keep up the good work.

Hey man!. I just wanted to ask you if you received my e-mail, I sent it on the 19th. Or maybe I didn't got your response. So, if that's case, please send your response again to both of my accounts since I can't be sure if Todito is gonna let your e-mail through that anti-spam thing.

Oh well, I hope to hear from you soon ^_^

Please check your e-mail Aniki-dono!, It's very Important!

Whoohoo, I finally made stupid IE open FF.net!

Sorry about that, but as you can prolly guess, my IE can't open FF.net most of the times, that's why I hadn't reviewed Obsessions... Sumimasen Aniki!

About the story: Hmm, pretty alike your first post, then again, I may have just forgotten how exactly was yout first post, but the story is as heart-warming as ever, so cute.

And hey, glad to see you're finally gonna post OMC, let's see if people react as we [Amy and Me] did, but don't worry, I know the readers will like it at the very least

And as you can notice, I'm not dead, well almost, I just have tons of things to do, I'll explain it in my next e-mail [Which I'll prolly send tomorrow]

So, good luck with OMC, not that I think you'll need it anyway.

-Ja!

>- Garden of Shadows [Shiro Inazuma]

I demand a sequal. NOW. This is way too interesting to end. MORE MORE MORE!

DAMN GOOD STORY! This story caught my attention from the beginning, and managed to hold it the whole way through...if I had time, I'd sit and read it straight through, but unfortunately, I do that and I won't go to work tomorrow, lol.

This is a great story! I'm actually surprised it wasn't as OOC as I imagined. Good luck on your next fanfiction!