This story is good. I like your ideas about what might happen, but I think the chapters are too short.

Good story.Update update.

It's very interesting, though I think longer chapters would be in order.

thiats a good story u hav going! keep it up!

I like your story.I don't want to make Anakin mad lol.If you want more reviews you might let guests review you story.:) Anyway you are a good writer.:) :)

Like it. Wonder what Ani's gonna do

Great- But been done. I'd like to see some of your writing on the more classic areas, like wedge antilles or corran horn