 Line 2009-11-14 . chapter 1 Thank you for the sequel - a well rounded ending to a good beginning. cheers |
 JaBoyYa 2009-07-31 . chapter 1YAY! a sequel. very humorous |
 Mih Black 2009-07-30 . chapter 1cute :) |
 Ink Penn 2009-07-15 . chapter 1Loved this one, too - simply amazing. ^.^ |
 CuppaCha 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Brilliant! Everything I said about the first one reiterated and multiplied by twelve. I really do love your style! James' prank on Snape was fantastic and Sirius' letter... I don't even know how to express how much that cracked me up. I had to stop reading while I calmed down because every time I looked back at the screen I started giggling again. |
 TeddyBear 8P 2009-04-28 . chapter 1Awe. Haha. |
 Purple-Spotted Pikadili 2009-03-24 . chapter 1That was adorable! I adore you! :D |
 GoldenKitsuneHime13 2009-03-20 . chapter 1lol that was genius xD great oneshot! |
 Jazz E. Roisin 2008-10-13 . chapter 1First of all, the Dislaimer you put up is totally unnecissary. Yes, there are homophobic people in the United States but you won't be refused the right to marry just because you support LGBTQA or write a gay fanfiction.
I loved it! This is the cutest and most convincing R/S story I have read in a long time. There aren't many I would go for since I'm more a J/S shipper myself. But I love the poem... 'vocabulary' wasn't what he wrote, though. :)
That was cute. Have you written or thought about writing an exteneded chapter R/S story?
Jazzelyn Emory Roisin |
 Bottlebrush 2008-09-17 . chapter 1Amazingly funny and sweet. I love the letter, if you can call it a letter. Well, an owl delivered it, so it must be a letter. And as a bonus you give us a glimpse of the neurotic mess the Marauders have turned Snape into:
'Snape gave James a very suspicious look. “What's your game? What are you doing? Are you distracting me? Where's Black? Oh, God, you're making me look the other way so he can steal my trousers, aren't you? Aren't you?” With those panicky words, Snape exited the Great Hall in a run.'
The ending is really rather lovely. |
 werewolfsfan 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Cute! |
 Avahin 2008-09-06 . chapter 1Hahahahahaha...I adore the random funniness in these two stories of yours. M...Chocolate Frogs. Brilliant stories, by the way, and I doubt America's going to take away your right to marry just 'cause you're writing stories about two fictional male characters. |
 EL 2008-07-14 . chapter 1 Lovely! I especially liked the nectar nipples :) Very creative and sweet... thanks muchly for the awesome story!
~EL |
 Dust Particle 2008-07-08 . chapter 1AWS
lol. i love the snape's little part there. haha |
 Potterworm 2008-07-08 . chapter 1aw... that was so CUTE |