I know what you mean by discouraged the same thing happened with this one fanfic i wrote but...foget about them. i think your story is brilliant and im not just saying that. sure you made a few mistakes but none really to take notes on. this is an swesome story so please continue it. and as Inuyasha once said "Ignore those filthy bastards" lol. Happy writing
~Star

wow...cool fic

but why won't you update it

please don't give up on this fic...i love it

keep going

yo...update already

I enjoyed it update soon

wow...you updated

great chapter

thank goodness Kagome broke free from Naraku

update soon can't wait to see Inuyasha kick Naraku's butt

this is a good fic

come on and update

i just love this story

but could you like update already

thanks

Good story, but just to let you know the parts with kagome being controled and killing inuyasha is like all from the 1st movie so yuo might change it a bit. but another than that its a good story

- karen

dude, do u realize that this is almost identical to the first movie?
almost... just a BIT different
~freaky

wow...very nice very. cant wait for next chap.! keep typing

Yes, yes she will!! Well...i dont know, but i sure do hope she does! continue soon!

hello! whew! this chapter was really good! i loved it! isn't inuyasha really sweet when he wants to be? it was soo...cute! hehe...anyway, i gotta tell you that on the title you spelt attacks wrong, it had a t instead of a k, oh and another thing, when kagome mumbled out some words to inuyasha after naraku left her motionless (it was towards the end) and when she tells inuyasha to run, you put it tale instead of take and it took me awhile b4 realizing that. soo yea but all in all i really did love this chapter!

YAY! you should have kagome like kill herself to save IY!! *tear* that would be buetiful!!

Interesting story, but it sounds an awful lot like the 1st Inuyasha movie (which I finally saw)! ;) Yeah, yeah, so it's Naraku instead of the other bad guy (the moth thing-- what's his name?)... And it's not like Naraku hasn't tried something like this before... But I'm still interested to see where this goes. Latas
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Ugh!! MUSSHHY THINGS! J/K It was great!! Now get Naraku to get Kagome back and and... I DONNO!! Plz Update soon! ^_^