  maggie 2007-04-07 . chapter 4 OMG! I love it. Great story. Keep writing |
 carolann 2006-07-04 . chapter 4Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. |
 Kate Andromeda 2005-06-26 . chapter 4Hi Jaclyn Parker,
the idear of this story is great! Lissa and the reaction of her parents to be, are wonderful and well written. Thank you for writing this down. :) |
| dream maven 2004-07-18 . chapter 4 I LOVE this story! (smiles insanely and claps hands) Every character was done perfectly, the story idea was fantastic (finally, a time travel story without a cheesy plot), and Picard and Crusher got together! Haha! Keep writing (maybe a sequel?) and put out more like this. |
| Dark Star Eyes 2004-05-26 . chapter 4 All I can say is WOW. What an excellent story, and very well written. Fantastic. |
| Commander-Miller 2004-04-22 . chapter 4 WOW! That was just about the best peice of star trek fiction i've ever read around here! Great job! The plot and how the story unfolded was simply amazing. even though this seems to contadict a whole lot of stuff in the later shows and movies, I almost like it like this better. Good job on capturing Picard's character - I've tried many times but it doesn't seem to sound really like him. Thanks for sending in a great story! I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
| Trekkie101 2004-04-22 . chapter 4 I loved this story and I actually thought it was pretty realistic (as in possible for 2 unbelievably stupid couples) until Beverly said that it was "corny." I don't think that word exists in 24th century vocabulary. |
| Trekkie101 2004-04-06 . chapter 3 That better not be the end of the story! This is too good! |
 Busy Nothings 2004-03-26 . chapter 2You've gotten me interested, so when are you going to tell the rest of the story? Waiting on the inevitable is hard to do. We all know WHO the girl is; now let us know the story behind her. |
| Ruruka4 2004-03-18 . chapter 2 PC!! Yay! I knew it. Well, it was pretty obvious, at least to me. Good job. Keep the chapters coming. |
| CapnRichelle 2004-03-18 . chapter 2 Yay, a new chapter and so quickly. But killing the future Beverly? Well i don't know how you're going to prevent that (hint hint) but i look forward to reading it. ;) |
| Trekkie101 2004-02-14 . chapter 1 Wonderful! Absolutely Wonderful! When's the next chapter? I want more! I am assuming that her mother is Beverly. I love Beverly/Jean-Luc stories. I'm writing one now. |
| lasemeuse 2004-02-06 . chapter 1 It's PC, so I love it. But I have to say I've seen this stroyline explored before. I'm excited to see where you go with it. |
| CapnRichelle 2004-02-06 . chapter 1 Yay, a good start on a P/C. Nice easy flowing storyline. Cant wait for next post (so make it soon) |
| Ruruka4 2004-01-26 . chapter 1 Very interesting story. Can't wait to read more. Update soon! |
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