That was adorable! I really liked how Sasuke knew. ;)

"Aww, no more?" (Extra cookies if you can name the quote. :D)

Seriously though, this deserves another chapter, if only to feel more complete. The ending at the moment leaves me feeling like it's unfinished. So, please write a second chapter at some point. :)

Take care.

I read this before and I could find it...now I did.

Poor Sakura can't see what's in front of her. Clever story, everyone was very in character (for once) which made it work perfectly.

wow nice oneshot

Very clever story, great fun to read.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

I really like this fic.

Sasuke's acting like a cold bastard, but he seems to be actually trying to help her (or Naruto). For a while, when Sasuke was warming up, I saw him this way (such as when he told her that Naruto rescued her from Gaara), but it's gotten kind of tough to keep that POV.

I'm not usually a big fan of Sakura/Naruto pairings, but the subtle way you did it in this fic was very nice.

You have proven to me that while Sasuke is a little ass, he still can be rather insightful. Sakura has annoying tendancies which she will grow out and as started to do in the series.

Both Naruto and Sasuke have never been allowed the luxuary of ignorant bliss that Sakura has been concooned in, but they pay for their insight and independence with stunted social skills and skewed perspectives.

Perfectly in character! This is why SasuSaku will NEVER happen.

Hm... very intriguing. :) Great sense of detail and 'reading between the lines.' I think a sequel would be great, too.

So cute. Short and adorable..I loved it! Loved it enough that now I badly wish it had happened in the actual series...but hey..I suppose that's what fanfics are for. Simply perfect.

I like how this fic just feels like... something normal. Something that proves something without being dramatic. _

I thought this was a very well-written and thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading it. Everyone was IC and your writing style is very nice! I hope to see more of your writing around here in the future! Thanks for posting!

Love the story so far. Talented writing along with a good story idea always work best together. Keep going with it.