 pappflora 2008-11-29 . chapter 1Humm,good story!Will it countinue? |
 cRaZyMaN676 2008-08-30 . chapter 1but WAIT!! the sharks be dead, yes?
okay, even if it was like a couple of years ago that you wrote this. YAH!! |
 Xtin2000 2006-09-22 . chapter 1Dud that was amazing! !! You've totally done it, this is my absolute favorite right now!! Perfectly written, great characterizations, fantastic visual, wonderful emotions, nice job ;-). I would totally love a sequel to this!!Just a little thing about the team checking on BB, some little talk between him and Raven..well just a thought. Anyways, thanks a million for posting this!! |
 dragonsroar 2005-09-14 . chapter 1That story was so awesome. You have got to write more stories like that. The action, the suspense, the adventure. It was breathtaking. |
 ChunkyBlackGlasses 2005-04-19 . chapter 1I simply LOVE this, especialy because it's got Aqualad in it! |
 Jimmy the Gothic Egg 2005-04-13 . chapter 1So good. I loved it! |
 Skittles the Sugar Fairy 2005-04-02 . chapter 1That was awesome... |
 Saturn's Hikari 2005-02-22 . chapter 1aw. |
 JestyKing 2005-02-06 . chapter 1 I'm pretty sure sharks can't close their eyes. |
 The Mad shoe 2004-12-15 . chapter 1 This fic ROCKS! |
 mdizzle999872 2004-10-07 . chapter 1 i really liked it. this was a pretty good story. |
 Miss. Phlish 2004-09-19 . chapter 1You write great fics. ^^ |
 Werewolf 2004-08-10 . chapter 1 That was nice and long. I could really imagine this as an eposide. Really descriptive and great touches of his background and R&BB. I luv BB |
 Fanfic Gurl 2004-07-04 . chapter 1 What an awesome story! I loved it! (I assume it's finished... lol but yes, it was sa-wet!) I love your writing style. It is really descriptive and helps put a perfect picture in the head of the reader. One thing though... ugh, I always feel so rude when I do this, but... well, maybe your writing could benefit from... augh... sorry... well, I noticed in one paragraph, "Beast Boy looked at the hole in the side of the ship, and noticed that much of the hole was already underwater. As big as the cruise ship was, a shark could probably swim around in there. He swam towards the hole himself and swam into the flooded part of the ship." There's nothing wrong with it, but maybe next time, to make something like this sound smoother, you could use synonyms or something... augh, I sound like a nit-picky b*, ignore me, *bows repeatedly to the almighty author* |
 aerinsol 2004-05-27 . chapter 1 That was so moving. I never really realized how hard Beast Boy had to deal with his past. This just puts it into a new perspective. I feel really sorry for him. That was kinda cool, and touching. Great job on sneaking the RavenxBB moments in there. GREAT JOB! |