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pappflora
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Humm,good story!Will it countinue?
cRaZyMaN676
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
but WAIT!! the sharks be dead, yes?

okay, even if it was like a couple of years ago that you wrote this. YAH!!
Xtin2000
2006-09-22 . chapter 1
Dud that was amazing! !! You've totally done it, this is my absolute favorite right now!! Perfectly written, great characterizations, fantastic visual, wonderful emotions, nice job ;-). I would totally love a sequel to this!!Just a little thing about the team checking on BB, some little talk between him and Raven..well just a thought. Anyways, thanks a million for posting this!!
dragonsroar
2005-09-14 . chapter 1
That story was so awesome. You have got to write more stories like that. The action, the suspense, the adventure. It was breathtaking.
ChunkyBlackGlasses
2005-04-19 . chapter 1
I simply LOVE this, especialy because it's got Aqualad in it!
Jimmy the Gothic Egg
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
So good. I loved it!
Skittles the Sugar Fairy
2005-04-02 . chapter 1
That was awesome...
Saturn's Hikari
2005-02-22 . chapter 1
aw.
JestyKing
2005-02-06 . chapter 1
I'm pretty sure sharks can't close their eyes.
The Mad shoe
2004-12-15 . chapter 1
This fic ROCKS!
mdizzle999872
2004-10-07 . chapter 1
i really liked it. this was a pretty good story.
Miss. Phlish
2004-09-19 . chapter 1
You write great fics. ^^
Werewolf
2004-08-10 . chapter 1
That was nice and long. I could really imagine this as an eposide. Really descriptive and great touches of his background and R&BB. I luv BB
Fanfic Gurl
2004-07-04 . chapter 1
What an awesome story! I loved it! (I assume it's finished... lol but yes, it was sa-wet!) I love your writing style. It is really descriptive and helps put a perfect picture in the head of the reader. One thing though... ugh, I always feel so rude when I do this, but... well, maybe your writing could benefit from... augh... sorry... well, I noticed in one paragraph, "Beast Boy looked at the hole in the side of the ship, and noticed that much of the hole was already underwater. As big as the cruise ship was, a shark could probably swim around in there. He swam towards the hole himself and swam into the flooded part of the ship." There's nothing wrong with it, but maybe next time, to make something like this sound smoother, you could use synonyms or something... augh, I sound like a nit-picky b*, ignore me, *bows repeatedly to the almighty author*
aerinsol
2004-05-27 . chapter 1
That was so moving. I never really realized how hard Beast Boy had to deal with his past. This just puts it into a new perspective. I feel really sorry for him. That was kinda cool, and touching. Great job on sneaking the RavenxBB moments in there. GREAT JOB!
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