update soon

Good luck getting your chapters out as quickly as you'd like- I know I have a lot of trouble with that.
I love the contrast between Lance's mood at the beginning of the chapter, and his mood at the end. Poor guy.

The first word that came to mind reading this was "cute!"
But cute in a sweet, touching sort of way, not a sappy way.
I like Piotr's fumbling, and his self-consciouness. It's very charming.

Ah, Pyro... I could just see that whole scene in my head.
I think this chapter is my favorite so far. There is a certain intelligence to the way you write Magento that I really enjoy.

You are delving deeply into each character's psyche, and you manage to have a distinct voice for each. That is a very difficult trick to pull off.

Wow, it's been a while since I've watched Evolution! But the way you capture the characters, I'm remembering them very quickly. I also admire the way you can keep the names "Piotr" and "Pietro" straight as you write. :) I'm looking forward to reading more.

so far, cool fic. I would so dig a Rogue chapter... and just so ya know, I'm a Romy shipper all the way...so a little Romy action would be awesome, if you don't mind.

ooh... yay... it let me log in! ok... reviewing now...

I wasn't planning on leaving a review to this chapter. In all honesty, I was hoping to be able to hold the urge to spout forth whatever nonsense (or half-sense, or even sense) that my teenaged mind seems to wish to spew at random intervals until at least the last chapter that you have posted thus far. Alas, the brain wouldn't shut up. Moving on... I definitely dig being inside the partially villainous head of Mags for a chapter. It's fun. Kinda creepy to find myself agreeing with some of his sentiment ("People are idiots"). But still fun. In two words: I dig.

It wouldn't let me sign in (damned bugs)...anywho...on to the review!

I don't think you made Warren sound schizo at all. In my opinion, you portrayed him as he is: a rich, twenty-something guy half thrown, half jumping into a situation that he's not entirely comfortable with because he's not entirely comfortable with himself. Simply put, the man's conflicted. I believe you pulled it off masterfully. Even if he did sound a bit like a whiney rich boy...which he kind of is, but not without warrant, I suppose. Anyway, you did really great.

Wow! yay! i've been waiting AGES for this and you finally did it! not that i mind though,i'm very patient *Grins* and i'm sorry i've never reviewed before *Mopes* just never entered my mind.

This was a great chapter and i loved the Lance/Pietroness lol,the stealing idea was cool!

Great chapter Luv!,

Lady F

Man, how do I miss these updates and things? oh wait, that's because they take so loong. Nah, that's cool, we love you all the same. Nice take on Lance here, in all his grumpy glory. And the not-so-friendly interaction with Pietro was spot on too. Good stuff! And just so's I don't miss the next one when it comes out, I'll have to add you to my author alerts... you've been warned... hehehe.

Yeah! You're not dead! that makes me so happy! Seriously, I felt like a kid on Christmas just now. Yippee! This was a great chapter, one of the better ones. Not only did you capture Lance's character perfectly (you have a knack for knowing these characters spot on, eh?) but you do his relationship with Pietro in a very fun and dark way. Bravo! I love all of their banters, so natural. Man, can't wait to read more of this. '-)

Snitter

Just a guess at why Rogue's so angry...
Could it be that they didn't trust her as easily as they did Piotr when she first joined?
Wait, no... Because she used to be one of his "groupies" when she was at the Brotherhood, which at the time was still under Mag's controll. So, the question remains, which was it... Or, am I wrong?

I really liked the way you did this, in a way that it's easy to follow even though it switchs from point of view to point of view.
Hurry up with the next chapter.

Wow, this is good!Okay, I would rant and ramble on about the past chapters, but that really won't be much help.
So, Lance's chapter. Okay, it was good. I'd say it's on the same level as Angel's; not quite as insightful as the rest. But, it did have good characterization, which is obviously what youre going for. My heart totally went out to Lance when he just let Kitty go. Dumb kid.
I liked the use of Pietro. Usually he's just pointlessly there, but he had a purpose in this. Cool.
I look forward to the next chapter!

i like the idea so far and you fic is great so far..each persons thoughts and lives as they get through after the apoc. incident