wow... wow... and, yet again, wow... ure so awsome u know?
write more! i command it! altho u dont have to if u dont want to i guess. love how u rite Rikku hehe... also love the tidus/yuna fluff. altho it does get repetitive, not that im complaining!

ahha.
the bird thing had me laughing.
and gippal's always a laugh.
you write well.
so well i had to put off my history speech to read this.
...not that i wouldn't put it off anyway, but, y'know...
so.
update soon then?

;_; No i was so excited for the next chapter and you haven't udpated in literally years!! Please update this is a wonderful story.

I just recently found this story and I am really, truly enjoying it! However, is it going to be updated or has it been discontinued? If you decide not to continue, that's fine, I'm sure I can imagine what happens but I would love if you could continue it either way!

Again, outstanding job.

Will you ever finish this story? It would be such a pity to leave such a good story unfinished.

Please don't take this the wrong way. And if you don't like this review, I can totally understand you not listening to me. I can't believe I'm going to this. I'm going to be the meanie and give the worst review I've ever given.

Ok, honey, I like your plot and the development, but for goodness sake! Just get to the point of the story! I know you have so many ideas from your original daydream of this story, but it is REALLY being dragged out now. You can skip all the insignificant details and move it along, you don't have to put every idea into it. And you keep repeating the same thoughts, which is just making filling space that doesn't need to be read.

I stopped reading everything 7 chapters ago because I got so bored and just started speed reading through the dialouge (good job on that btw, I love how you keep the characters telling the story), but I can tell even you have lost interest in the story and writing it.

But I am a firm believer in finishing what you start. I started reading this fanfic, and I am going to finish reading it as soon as YOU finish writing it. And don't feel any pressure to make it absolutly perfect or include every transition scene, just let the rest of it play out nice and easy.

I really do like the concept of the idea (though I was looking for a few more moments of tenderness). And I am really impressed you have written so much. It is really hard for any writer to get beyond the first 10 chapters on this site (me included, so I don't think I'm some know-it-all preaching to you). But don't waste so much more time on the rest of it. It's ok to move onto to other stories that I'm sure you're busy creating.

Sorry I wrote so much. Good luck with the rest of it!
And sorry for being honest, please don't abuse me!

Yay, I'm favoriting this. You're doing amazingly. Keep going, you musn't stop, okay? ^-^ I love how you add so much depth, yet it's very subtle. I love the hints of Yuna and Tidus fluff, sometimes less is more, because it makes you really want to go back to the chapters where you witnessed 'THE FLUFF'.
Cheers to you.

-'rith

NO! UPDATE SOON!

Aw... I like this story. This one ties into the game really well! Nice reflections, and you've captured the characters beautifully. The story is believable - I wanna know what happens!!

I guess I'll have to wait for the update then, huh?

Til then,

XX-diamonds-XX

Why have you stopped writing this great fanfic. I was so into it then it stopped

it is a very good story I LOVED IT ! maby alittle more t+y time though when are you gonna finish?

this is the best story i have read so far... keep it up and update soon okay? i love it. i hope theres gonna be more action and romance to. but ever story needs the light times right?
hope to read the next chapter soon. bye

wow, it's been a year exactly since you updated!

This story is so wonderful, you really have to update! Ah, oh well. Sorry. I just really would love to read more.

I know how it is when life just goes nuts on you and you just don't ahve the time or the inclination to write. Or you want to, but just can't bring yourself to it. I feel like that often. But you must perservere!

I hope things are going well for you. Keep writing, even if it's not fanfiction.

yours,

Ukky

want some stones?

Okay, time for me to step in. your author's note saying that you were OOC with Yuna and Tidus - BS. You were *not* OOC.

Happy-go-lucky people often do exactly what Yuna told Tidus she always used to do: smile when she wanted to be sad.

Tidus was carefree in Zanarkand - NOT. His dad treated him like ** and was an alcoholic and - possibly (and probably) - abused him physically. (at least, that's my guess)

Tidus obviously learned to ignore it, and told himself it didn't have anything to do with his own self-worth. He learned to hate his father so that the pain of being abused and unloved didn't touch him and harm his ego. He needed to have a strong ego and a sense of self-esteem in order to survive. So he pushed the pain away.

Yuna did similar things, but more consiously, when she smiled instead of looking sad.

I believe you write them perfectly. Yuna was NEVER as cheerful as Rikku - she just hid her pain and tried to be. She *tried* to be cheerful. She gave it her best, but it doesn't mean that she truely felt it.

For someone who spent most of her childhood planning her own *demise* then becoming a figurehead for an entire *world* there is no way she could have so easily gotten rid of that. perhaps in FFX-2 she was trying to relive her childhood, but the lessons learned early are never really forgotten.

I had to grow up early myself, and I always found that I just didn't feel comfortable with other children. I had lost that child-like air and found adults to be easier to understand. So I think I empathize with Yuna in a way.

People who can only see the surface, such as those people who only see Tidus (and Yuna in FFX-2) as cheerful, shallow individuals - well, those people are just close-minded and dense. They are ignorant and don't bother to look beyond the surface.

That doesn't mean that *you* are at fault, just because they say you are. Believe in yourself. You saw the truth beneath the facade. Don't second-guess your intuition just because other people aren't as smart as you are. :-p

*hugs*

Ukky

I know all too well how Yuna feels. It's good to see a fanfic get into that fear of him leaving again. It never truely goes away, it just fades with time.

After that, we need some happy stuff . . . how about some sexual tension between them? Tidus has been quite the gentleman, but he has to have hormones inside that very athletic body of his. Testosterone doesn't just control aggression, after all . . . ^.^

Oh, what am I saying. I know you wrote this a long time ago. Now I can only hope. ;-p

Ukky