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Unknown Variable
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
(I) LOVE IT!
ultra dragon
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
nice story, but why did naruto killed them all? and what sasuke was doing there? how old they were?
lord Sia
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
One word for you;
Beautiful.
Crtiic
2007-12-25 . chapter 1
Well, the fact that Sasuke is back in Konoha is surprising-he did after all desert to villian Orochimaru.

Canon, Hinata is in love with Naruto, so the fact that you state no one loved him is incorrect, but as Hinata still has not told him this it still works.

Honestly, I can't imagine everyone to turn on him. After all he has Tsunade and Ero-sennin behind him. Sakura warms up to him too, eventually. By-the-by, it is believed that the Yondamie (dead) is his father based on words said by the Godamie in passing. However, they are old and suspicsion is that one if not both will die in the upcoming battles.

Actually, your story is rather believeable. And now that I've checked the published date, all of my above points may be null and void. Good writing.
XENO Prototype
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
T_T
LoveOverAnime
2007-02-21 . chapter 1
i don't really get this. is this story about how naruto kills everyone but sasuke is still alive?
Herooftimes
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
That was great. and REALLY sad. but what happened? was there a battle or something? and what about Gaara?
Saniwa
2006-01-10 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, making my skin crawl. I love your description for everything here ^_^ Kudos!
Spazzcat-The-Neji-Glomper
2006-01-06 . chapter 1
wow. awesome story.
TehTasteofBlood
2005-09-11 . chapter 1
I loved what you write
you are a phenominal Writer
i love all the details and i cannot fathom how hard you worked to make this how Awesome it is
because this is just a great read, you will go far
i know my opinions dont change anything, but Loved your writing
vivid
Alicorna
2005-04-16 . chapter 1
very angsty, a little over done, I think...
I'm not completely sure if it makes sense or not, but still, failry ok.
Alicorn
Archangel Rhapsody
2005-01-16 . chapter 1
Dark, kind of dark, but a good story.
Sariachan-KokiriLeaf
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Genres and rating you've choosen for your fic are ok, but Naruto is very OOC...but this is a AU story, so maybe that's ok, too.
Anyway, I liked it! ;)
sapphermine
2004-06-26 . chapter 1
Wow! That was really, really wonderful!
I loved it!
Great job!
I loved the way you explained the thing the villeger's do to Naruto... That in a way he wasn't what the villager's thought him to be... That was really cool!
It was really filled with emotions and the like... Very, very brilliant...
Good work!
Pyro911
2004-02-28 . chapter 1
its so sad. . . . and written very well. . . it made me cry~_~. . . .
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