Nicely done! Bruce is a sanctimonious prat at times.
He's mad about Diana, you can tell and he's a tad jealous too.
You write really well. :)

Interesting story.I liked it.

This is F***ing brilliant! A poigniant story with that flows really nicly. A good grasp of the mechanics of the characters!
Have you thought about cooperating with Meljean Brook to write some thing Batman/Wonder Woman (with a bit of Superman thrown in) related?? I think it would be a work of Genius!!!
Like this!

deep...

Great work! I loved it.

I know that this probably isn't going to be read, given the time gap, but I appreciate all of your comments.

I wrote this story when I was first coming into the Wonder Woman character. I'd always followed Batman and Superman (at least remotely), and then I really got into DC this past year.

There's a lot of potential with Wonder Woman that's not being used. But whenever I think of her, I do think of her relationship to Superman or Batman, because I think the Trinity they make in the DCU really does have a great weight to it -- in a strange way, they make a whole. They're individual aspects of the ideal human being, but bring them together, and they're the best of the best.

It's funny that pretty much all of this came from a Wonder Woman story that was about her having an imaginary relationship with Superman.

Wow. That was incredible. Please keep writing.

Very good material. Entertaining give and take between Bruce and Diana.

That was soooo awsome!!! Please write more very soon!!

Nifty ...

I liked the damned story. I don't know what else to say!

An excellent story, and a situation I had not considered before. A wonderful way of nailing down Bruce's emotional reasons for doing what he did... this story goes a long way in bringing a sense of compassion in his character which seems to be lacking in the comic books. Please write more!

Wow.

Awesome! This is turning out to be a great story & I hope you keep writing it :)

---SilverCat56@yahoo.com

Incredible. Angry and passionate and heartbreaking with a spark o hope. More? I'm begging here.