 Hepburn 2008-11-02 . chapter 1Nicely done! Bruce is a sanctimonious prat at times.
He's mad about Diana, you can tell and he's a tad jealous too.
You write really well. :) |
 Knight's Shadow 2004-05-24 . chapter 1 Interesting story.I liked it. |
 SaNe! 2002-11-11 . chapter 1 This is F***ing brilliant! A poigniant story with that flows really nicly. A good grasp of the mechanics of the characters!
Have you thought about cooperating with Meljean Brook to write some thing Batman/Wonder Woman (with a bit of Superman thrown in) related?? I think it would be a work of Genius!!!
Like this! |
 anonymous 2002-11-10 . chapter 1 deep... |
 Pototo 2002-08-01 . chapter 1 Great work! I loved it. |
 superninja 2002-04-23 . chapter 1 I know that this probably isn't going to be read, given the time gap, but I appreciate all of your comments.
I wrote this story when I was first coming into the Wonder Woman character. I'd always followed Batman and Superman (at least remotely), and then I really got into DC this past year.
There's a lot of potential with Wonder Woman that's not being used. But whenever I think of her, I do think of her relationship to Superman or Batman, because I think the Trinity they make in the DCU really does have a great weight to it -- in a strange way, they make a whole. They're individual aspects of the ideal human being, but bring them together, and they're the best of the best.
It's funny that pretty much all of this came from a Wonder Woman story that was about her having an imaginary relationship with Superman. |
 Alice 2001-11-30 . chapter 1 Wow. That was incredible. Please keep writing. |
 KMGrady 2001-05-16 . chapter 1 Very good material. Entertaining give and take between Bruce and Diana. |
 WW 2001-03-31 . chapter 1 That was soooo awsome!!! Please write more very soon!! |
 Adrian Tullberg 2001-03-30 . chapter 1Nifty ... |
 Rika 2001-01-28 . chapter 1 I liked the damned story. I don't know what else to say! |
 John McGraw 2001-01-21 . chapter 1 An excellent story, and a situation I had not considered before. A wonderful way of nailing down Bruce's emotional reasons for doing what he did... this story goes a long way in bringing a sense of compassion in his character which seems to be lacking in the comic books. Please write more! |
 Sophie Paromen 2001-01-10 . chapter 1Wow. |
 SilverCat56 2001-01-09 . chapter 1 Awesome! This is turning out to be a great story & I hope you keep writing it :)
---SilverCat56@yahoo.com |
 Grey Bard 2001-01-09 . chapter 1 Incredible. Angry and passionate and heartbreaking with a spark o hope. More? I'm begging here. |