Very deep and troubling story. Excellent writing!

That was so sad, and strangly fitting

Chica, you must post this on EI. Some of the newbies there haven't seen it and that's not fair!! this is great!!

Wow. Insight like CRAZY! The first chapter especially, because this one does seem a little off from what I know about Doyle. But that's okay. It's very deep and I've learned a lot about Harper, and the show in general (I'm new to it). I hope you add another chapter sometime ... this time before ten months is up ;)

I love this fanfiction. Good job.

that was cool...seemed right on the spot and totally in character

I love this story and I was thinking that maybe a story where Andromeda eavesdrops on Harper as he's talking to himself could be interesting?!
Anyway, I didn't review to bug you for more stories(cough cough), but to congradulate you on the excellent job you did!
Please write more. Another chapter, story, a sequel, anything!!

I just finished 'Hidden' and 'Shatered' both of them are very good. I think you caught Harper's feelings about the crew pretty well especially in 'Shattered'

Oh my gosh those are SUCH awsome stories! I absolutley loved them and really, really, really hope you write more!! :D You did so awsome with this, I completley loved it! ^^

It's all so beautifully weepy. :'(

::giant hugs for Harper::

HOLY MALOLEY ON TOAD SUCK TUESDAY. This story rocks. You totally give us an insight to Harper's inner mechanics that plays into everything we see on the t.v. (and I'm wondering what kind of precognitive abilities you have, becuase I read this after seeing the fear pheromone episode last night and it fits perfectly). Please, if you have mercy for a poor reader's soul, update soon!

Very nice reflective of Harper. The Seefra world is coming out clear and focused in this. I love it. How you put it together and the wording. It was completely Harper. Awesome work;)

This story is... just fantastic. It's been a while since I've found a 'Drom story I really connected with. I also love the characterizations of Harper and everyone in between. Just... wow. Thanks for this little gem. Heck, I may even (possibly, kinda) make myself like Doyle, only if I think about your story (even if the episode is completely different). Thanks!

OH. MY. GOD.

O.O LOVED IT. No; I'm not sure that's strong enough. Hats off because I could never trust myself to write any of the char's POV, while you did an AMAZING job! And that's exactly how/what I pictured Doyle being. A consolation, not a 'blonde haired bimbo' necessarily. And the emotion...wow...hope you write more soon!

Perfection! Absolute Perfection. This is exactly how I want and think Harper should feel after everything that's happened to him. In my opinion, he should show great grief over Rommie's death and if he does on the Phear Phantom Phactor, which I haven't seen, this is how he should feel. I was a little upset when he only showed slight grief over Rommie's death in the DI Part 2 but this is how it should have been. Bravo...this, this is going into my favorites!