Brilliant; comedy, or rather, good comedy is always a tricky subject, especially when it's the focus of your story. Making something humourous without detracting from the possibility of it actually occuring within the established confines of the universe in which you are opertating, is a very difficult task, and you succeeded spectacularly.
I think I'll take a look at your other short stories while I wait for the latest update on your Reffie trilogy

~ BH&H

Wonderful, this story was dead amusing, I was laughing my ** off! Excellent job, fantastic story. I like your charecters and the plot was excellent.

Heh. I was going to wait until the actual end of the fic before giving a review on it, but as it turns out I can't do that...I have to tell you how absolutely awesome this story is right now. XD I can so totally see something like this happening with those three. Great job!

Yesh! I have read it. Man, that last chapter was longer than I thought it'd be. But I'm glad! ^_^ It was a funny story. Me liked that I did. *thumbs up!* ^^

from start to finish this story is GREAT! ROTFLMAO!

LOL, great story! I loved the part about reno trying to get the janitors to clean up his mess, but he was dressed as one! And, i really wouldent mind a 4th chapter, reno's plan sounds very intersting. I loved the random points of absolute madness ^-^

good very good I am starting to read chapter 2

Oh, wow, that was great. I'm glad it was a substantial read. I had guessed that the tape was probably in the VCR console thing...but not that Rufus had planned to destroy the tape the very next day. Heheh...perhaps a sequel where they get into MORE trouble by wreaking havoc with said materia? Another of these would be good!

Absolutely hilarious! I loved it.

Omg! This was fricking hillarious! I absolutely *love* it! It was all too wonderful! Elena getting concussed, Rude's sensitivity to his baldness, Elena and Reno's constant bickering, everything was so amazing! I was laughing the entire time! I didn't think that it could get better untill Tseng walked into the scene! Omg! It was so damn hillarious! This is so going on my favourites list! hee hee! Really, really amazing piece. I love the way you write the Turks Ealinese and nobody does Reno the way you do! Absolutely amazing!
T. Pirate.

What a fantastic ending to this story! I was feeling really sorry for the Turks having to clean up the mess they made, so it's rather satisfying to see Reno coming up with another plan. Even if it will cause more chaos... All in all, a wonderful, funny story, and I'm sad there's only three chapters, actually...

This is great! There aren't nearly enough good Turk fics out there. I'd love to see a sequel.

LOL! That deserved all caps! Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm. . . I'm not sure, but I think I might have just sent in a review when I didn't mean too. OOps. Heh. My coordination really decreases when I'm tired. Okay, well, have to try and write something even though I should be sleeping. . . amazing story. Really, truly was. Love all of your dialogue. Reno, Rude, and Elena are so wonderfully in character. It was great, really really great. Very funny. Loved it alot. *smiles*
Sorry 'bout the clipped sentences but I really gotta sleep now. hee hee. Great story! Can't wait to see how it ends. I love it so much!
T. Pirate

Oh, another chapter! And so soon too! This one had me snickering all the way through. I absolutely loved Elena's concussion; it was so funny. And Rude's 'joke' really needs to go down in history, it really does.